Ateaze - Pain (Remix)

[martian master]

This is my homies song, he's just starting to rap and tryna make it big. The song is a remix of Game's Pain by Game and Keyshia Cole. please listen and feedback

http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/ateaze-p...ng.767724.html

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[mykill]

this guy read the rules... hmm...

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

your words are there just you need to execute the flow alot better, its pretty bad. just keep working you'll get better