Poyo / Mykill / Cli-City - California Dreaming

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Shoutout To Mykill & Cli For These Killer Verses

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...and-blues.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-cli-city.html

[mykill]

#DontSleepOnPoyo

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this needs a download link

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Poyo - Cali Dreamin (Feat. Mykill & Cli-City).mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform


#MykillDaBest

[akkucc]

Nice song, and nice verses by all of you guys, i like cli's verse most than mykill's and then poyo's. so overall it is 3.5/5

[Mr. Swag]

Damn that's dope as fuck... Honestly sound very professional! Can't really decide who was the best tho, I liked Poyo on this one. Only thing to critisize would be on the beat (which is dope too), the drums could go harder during the verses... Besides that I really like it.
4/5

[MC_Crary]

Poyo's gettin some of the best features from everybody. First off I'm very jealous of you gettin this beat. I'm a big Jefferson Airplane fan and would've loved to have this sample. But anyway this track had some nice bounce to it. Everybody brought it. I think from a production standpoint the track would've built up better if it went, Poyo, Cli, then Myk. Not that either's verse sounded bad, I just think it would've sounded better that way, idk just my opinion lol.

[THA GR8 M8]

Poyo - Decent flow, had a few slip-ups throughout your verse. I wasn't feeling the lyrics. I feel like with the hook you could've took a better stab at your verse. Hook was "California Dreaming" and you were just talking about subjects you could talk about in any song. 3/5.
Mykill - Flow was decent for you. Still rushing lines, which is easy to fix but you can't seem to. Nice lyrics, but not sure what your verse lyrics had to do with the hook at all. 3/5.
Cli-City - Good flow, had a dope switch-ups throughout. Decent lyrics but the same with the others, not sure what they had to do with the hook. 3.5/5
Other - What was the point of that sample hook? These lyrics had nothing to do with "California Dreaming". I mean I guess Poyo's was the most on topic because drugs are big in California lol, even though when I first heard it I thought they all were gunna stick with a topic from the hook. Just not sure what the song was at all lol. I figured with California Dreaming I was gunna hear about beaches, Hollywood, good weather, etc.
Overall - 3/5.

[Late122]

Poyo - Decent flow, had a few slip-ups throughout your verse. I wasn't feeling the lyrics. I feel like with the hook you could've took a better stab at your verse. Hook was "California Dreaming" and you were just talking about subjects you could talk about in any song. 3/5.
Mykill - Flow was decent for you. Still rushing lines, which is easy to fix but you can't seem to. Nice lyrics, but not sure what your verse lyrics had to do with the hook at all. 3/5.
Cli-City - Good flow, had a dope switch-ups throughout. Decent lyrics but the same with the others, not sure what they had to do with the hook. 3.5/5
Other - What was the point of that sample hook? These lyrics had nothing to do with "California Dreaming". I mean I guess Poyo's was the most on topic because drugs are big in California lol, even though when I first heard it I thought they all were gunna stick with a topic from the hook. Just not sure what the song was at all lol. I figured with California Dreaming I was gunna hear about beaches, Hollywood, good weather, etc.
Overall - 3/5.

I thought this is just a remix and that's part of the beat.

[THA GR8 M8]

I thought this is just a remix and that's part of the beat.

It's part of the beat no duh, but it's a sample hook. The sampled it from somewhere else.


And wow. Kid Ink actually stayed on topic with the sample. Nice to hear what could be done on this beat.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

It's part of the beat no duh, but it's a sample hook. The sampled it from somewhere else.


And wow. Kid Ink actually stayed on topic with the sample. Nice to hear what could be done on this beat.

i just liked the sample, my intent wasnt really to stay true to the hook it was just to go in, ya feel me? even though i had a couple lines refering to the hollywood lifestyle. appreciate the detailed feed though

[mykill]

i believe its Wilson Philips...

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

i believe its Wilson Philips...

That song is dope af, i wish i knew how to make beats, there some more killer samples to use in that song