J$ - OMG (He's Swaggin')

[THA GR8 M8]

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[KidComet]

The part when you adlibbed (daddy) after saying (swag daddy) in the beginning, you shouldve emphasized that more, it sounded kind awkward when you said it like all monotone the way you did.

After 0:20 thats when everything started to smooth out and I started banging my head to this shit

There was some parts in your flow where you would either rap to far off the bar (like after the 4th measure in the beat) or stop right before it hit

But besides all that this track was banging, ahahah "This beat is nuts... cashews" that one made me smirk

I give it a good 7/10

something I wouldn't mind having in my ipod actually. Espicially if you work out those little flaws, and kinda add that sorta "swag" to your voice, cause if you listen closely enough Its easy to tell that your a white american just by your voice, kinda montonish, but im not trippin

[THA GR8 M8]

It's not me, it's my bestfriend, the other dude in THP. And he's not white American ha. He's black. But thanks.


I'll return feedback on your song tomorrow though.

[KidComet]

It's not me, it's my bestfriend, the other dude in THP. And he's not white American ha. He's black. But thanks.


I'll return feedback on your song tomorrow though.

this dude sounds mad white tho lol, most black ppl have like an accent or something, where is he from?

edit: nvm i relistened and yeah hes black lol

[THA GR8 M8]

this dude sounds mad white tho lol, most black ppl have like an accent or something, where is he from?

Florida. He's African American/German. He isn't no hoodrat though. So maybe thats why lol.

[THA GR8 M8]

Let's get some more listens on this before we put out the next track........

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

beat reminds me of faded. when he drug his words at the start it sounded mad awkward. wasnt really feelin this one it kinda sounds like he had wrote a verse to no beat then just tried to fit the words in. second verse was slightly better. i fuck with the chorus tho lol

[THA GR8 M8]

^ That was part of the flow and I thought it was dope. Thanks for the listen.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

no problem bro

[cGrumm]

The beat was sick, I like it. The adlibs could of been more intense and what not. The lyrics werent that good tbh, I wasnt feeling them. For me it sounded too much like tyga Im Faded/Rack City flow. The chorus was good, the robotic girl voice. Swag is getting played out though. It was decent, nothing too good to stand out, and there wasnt anything that made me not wanna listen so it was solid.
3.5/5

[THA GR8 M8]

The beat was sick, I like it. The adlibs could of been more intense and what not. The lyrics werent that good tbh, I wasnt feeling them. For me it sounded too much like tyga Im Faded/Rack City flow. The chorus was good, the robotic girl voice. Swag is getting played out though. It was decent, nothing too good to stand out, and there wasnt anything that made me not wanna listen so it was solid.
3.5/5

Appreciate the listen man.

[JSmooth]

Lyrics- 3.8/5
flow- 3.5/5
overall- 3.5/5
first song ive heard from you and its a pretty decent track. flow was off at times which hurt a lil and then for that beat and the lyrics u had u needed more confidence/swag in your delivery. good job though