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  • #13
    Intro-Nice intro. You do all your own mixing or you got a guy?
    Who Am I- We heard this one already didnt we?
    Believe Me- mixing on this wasnt as good as the previous two tracks. concept was kind of whack. lyrics and the beat didnt really match
    In the End- mixing went back up, dunno if i'd use Autotune. you sound ok without usually
    My Life- Isnt this a Stay Schemin' beat remake? You killed the beat though. Multis at one point were crazy
    Defiantly Underrated- hook was different. another good song. consistent to your style. you might want to rework the chorus. dont think it came out as good as it could have
    Staring at Walls - the last part is hard to hear. change the effects and turn up the vocals
    Do They Hear - your accent really comes out on this song. i think the chorus still came out off-key, even with the auto tune
    Like Me (Fuck Yall) - great energy and delivery in this one
    Gets Around - Hmmm.... symphony strings.... You better kill this shit....Hmmm... I see where you went with this one... I was thinking one thing, but actually its a song about... yeah...hmmm... good job! Hook needs to be re-written, but the effects and mixing on it work. Definitely put more work into your hooks. they carry the whole song
    Born Again - could use some commentary in the intro. same hook problem. work on em
    Perfect Day - Good track. great mixing. good delivery/flow/lyrics, you did a good job with the chorus adlibs
    Time Bomb - Interesting beat....i like it. you carry yourself well on this track. *IF YOU EVER WANNA DO A REMIX* get at me, hook even wasnt that bad, this feels way outta your familiar zone and you rocked it (pssssst lets do a remix of this) If you guys listen to NOTHING ELSE on this tape, GO LISTEN TO THIS TRACK
    The Moment - Great way to cap off the tape. Can't really distinguish the verse and the hook...

    Overall: 3.7/5, This is probably one of the best tapes mixing and quality wise I've listened to. It's a great effort. There's considerable work put into it and it shows. When you put a tape like this together, you gotta put some damn effort in it and it shows TEN FOLD. Now there are some blemishes. Work on those hooks, get that mixing consistent OVERALL, and make sure you're putting concept + beat and pairing em well so that the end result is a great song

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    • #14
      thank you for the feed man!!!!! much apprciated, i agree with everything you said, tbh with you this mixtape was still kinda rushed for me ive worked on alot of material i havn't put out and got a batch of the best songs that dint need to much find tuning and stuck them toghether , in reality ide of liked to ov spent alot more time on the tape fixing things re-writing etc but felt so pressured by this project that i thought if i dont put out what ive got now it ent coming at all and ide of scrapped it, lol, truth be told every single track on here took me about half an hour to an hour to write and mastering about the same so, in reality every song only has about 2 hours of work in, but now i can breathe and relax an work solidly on my DEMO/ALBUM and making EVERYTHING solid, this was just a launch point and still a justa mixtape, thank you for taking the time to feed man!! much apprciated !!

      an yer i do all my own mixing/mastering etc, for my demo it will be all my own production aswell, but that guna be a while in the making, and yer man we'll sort a remix out deffo!!


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      • #15
        im bout to start my first listen
        twitter.com/basedpoyo

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        • #16
          Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
          im bout to start my first listen
          BEFORE YOU LISTEN TO ANYTHING ELSE, go down the list and listen to Time Bomb

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          • #17
            you actually dope bro.
            killer flow and great quality.
            my only problem is you sound like you gettin raped when you rap.
            it might be your accent but its kinda high pitched or some shit. sound like you bout to cry.

            YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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            • #18
              lol ^^ yer man its a habit i snap into when i spit that i cant help it , kinda like eminem on relapse only i need to brake that habit , i have on alot of more recent stuff just snap into it without realising alot lol, thanks for the feed tho man!!


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              • #19
                Bummpppppppp!!!


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                • #20
                  Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                  Bummpppppppp!!!
                  Your thread is fucking stickied at the top of the section, are you retarded lololol



                  protect dunston at all costs

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                  • #21
                    Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
                    Your thread is fucking stickied at the top of the section, are you retarded lololol
                    besides your apprent and unjust use of the word "retard" i felt like bumping the thread as i wanted more feed , just because the thread is stickied that doesn't mean its getting feed so if i want to BUMP ill BUMP, on top of that why call me a retard? a retard is someone who is genuienly mental retarded and i am certain im not retarded the thread alone proves that, so if you want to be cynical over the fact ive bumped my thread think of more fitting terminology..... and unlike your comment this isn't offensive to you, this is purely saying theres no need to call me a retard AT ALL tbh ....if your not going to feed the tape then why post in the thread at all SNM.


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                    • #22
                      Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                      besides your apprent and unjust use of the word "retard" i felt like bumping the thread as i wanted more feed , just because the thread is stickied that doesn't mean its getting feed so if i want to BUMP ill BUMP, on top of that why call me a retard? a retard is someone who is genuienly mental retarded and i am certain im not retarded the thread alone proves that, so if you want to be cynical over the fact ive bumped my thread think of more fitting terminology..... and unlike your comment this isn't offensive to you, this is purely saying theres no need to call me a retard AT ALL tbh ....if your not going to feed the tape then why post in the thread at all SNM.
                      dont pay attention to noble bro. he's a hater.
                      he's just jealous of you because he's not at your level of rapping yet.
                      he probably should download your mixtape and learn a thing or to to improve himself.

                      YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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                      • #23
                        Like Me & Time Bomb Crank Bro
                        twitter.com/basedpoyo

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                        • #24
                          Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                          besides your apprent and unjust use of the word "retard" i felt like bumping the thread as i wanted more feed , just because the thread is stickied that doesn't mean its getting feed so if i want to BUMP ill BUMP, on top of that why call me a retard? a retard is someone who is genuienly mental retarded and i am certain im not retarded the thread alone proves that, so if you want to be cynical over the fact ive bumped my thread think of more fitting terminology..... and unlike your comment this isn't offensive to you, this is purely saying theres no need to call me a retard AT ALL tbh ....if your not going to feed the tape then why post in the thread at all SNM.
                          Well Dam
                          Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
                          But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
                          So Just Call Me....
                          "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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