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Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbigView Post
oh he cares bro, he may say he doesnt, but deep down he cares alot.
he wanted to post the last song and get more shine and good feedback and feel good about it before he went on his hiatus, but instead he got the TRUTH!
now he's gonna try to redeem himself by posting yet another song that he thinks is worthy.
either that, or he will never return again.
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i stopped reading after that sentence.
just for admitting to your dickriding, i refuse to take any feedback you post serious.
from now on your feedback is useless and ineligible bro.
gtfo fuckboy
i cant believe ol' fuckboy admitted to dickriding
GTFO NOW! I TELL YOU !! ....NOW!!!!
Nah you read it all.It's just that I shut you down to the point you have no more aruguements to be used towards me.
That was then. This is now
The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels
seems ta be alota beef/tention from this song? aha, truthfully i am feelin it, the beat is nice tho real talk, the flow is on point! buttt the delivery is lacking emotion, i mean it seems like your depressed and cba? i could be wrong but if thats the case, sort it out man coz you deffo got skills just wana hear a lil more emotion/hype in the song, as for clis comment and apparently changin of opinion i think he ment that overall the songs average but the verses are dope, makes sense, i mean the song is average becuz of the lack of emotion/delivery if that was changed up this song would be dope...But whatever the beef is over its not my buisness so on that note...
The song in general is ok. The beat is calling for you to go so much harder than you did on it though. I think if you did that, it would stand out even more. I think the verses were fine, just delivered with less emotion than I would have liked in a song. All in all this song is just average, not close to terrible, but not a great song either. Keep working man. We'll keep listening. I'll give this one a 3/5. I'll continue to listen to see if I can catch anything else, but I like the direction that the music as a whole is going in.
as an entire concept, here's my problems with it:
There's zero lead in. It just starts. Like the music doesnt build up really or any intro or anything. its just BAM!, song. I know its not meant to have any kind of lead-in but it might have carried the concept a bit better. Chorus is ok, but I thini the most distracting thing to me is the beat. That synth is kinda amatuerish. Along with the toms. Composition of it and variety is good, just tell who ever produced it to fix that synth and those toms and that beat will be heat.
Flow wise, you went really really really monotone on this. I dont get that usual Noble energy from it. Almost reminded me of a Mykill song... hmm... Verses were solid though. Good job with them. Hook was mixed good. Overall vibe is good consistent with what you do man. I dont know why you want feedback on your sound, 99.9% of everything you do always sounds like a "Noble Song". You tryin' to change it up?
Overall: 3.3/5, good song, but conceptually I think it missed its mark.
I dont know why you want feedback on your sound, 99.9% of everything you do always sounds like a "Noble Song". You tryin' to change it up?
Overall: 3.3/5, good song, but conceptually I think it missed its mark.
I think you misunderstood. I'm just looking to see what everyone thinks of the song overall. I don't really pay attention to what people say about flow, lyrics, etc wise now as far as feedback. So I just wanna know what people think of the overall song and how it sounds. Kinda how you commented on 'Big Spender'... You said even though technically it might not be 4.8/5, but you still gave it that score. I think with the music I'm making and wanna make, whether or not people like the songs, I'm executing the sound for each song that I'm going for. And honestly, I truly enjoy the music I'm making. So whether or not someone says my flow and lyrics are good, it's not gunna change the way I approach my next song because I'm liking the music I make. And I'm only making it for my pleasure, so I've gotten to the point where detailed feedback isn't what I'm looking for really.
Tl;dr - I would rather hear what people think overal of my songs rather then about my flow/lyrics/etc because I don't pay attention to that anymore.
Thanks for the listen though Myk. The lack of emotion was done on purpose. It's like the angle I was going with the song. For example: Wayne didn't have the same energy on 6'7' as he did on Mirror. Two different approaches to a song. But the main reason I went for this approach was... If you followed all of the songs we released that were part of the mix tape, they are all more on the 'hype' sound. This song was too give the mix tape a more balanced feel lol.
Yeah I got that. I was just saying that I dunno if it works. Your presence on other songs sounds good and is fitting, but something on this one wasnt on par. It's like your were taking that flow and delivery, and taming it. And to me it just came out as a bastardized version of it and not that whole 6'7'/Mirror difference. ya feel me?
Yeah I got that. I was just saying that I dunno if it works. Your presence on other songs sounds good and is fitting, but something on this one wasnt on par. It's like your were taking that flow and delivery, and taming it. And to me it just came out as a bastardized version of it and not that whole 6'7'/Mirror difference. ya feel me?
Yeah I gotcha. I wasn't disagreeing with your opinion, just letting you know where I was going with the song. I didn't think having more energy would fit with it. The beat was more mellow and shouldn't have had an aggressive flow and mic presence with it. Thanks for listening though man.
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