Unfinished ft Shylo

[KidComet]

Not done, we need to mix it down better

im the 2nd guy




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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

ehhh, another "real" hip hopper elitest. lol.
but i like the vibe of this. your flow and lyrics fit, also the other guy was decent as well.
you dont have the most clever lyrics, but i love how you pronounce some of your words and deliver them and it sounds pretty dope.
such as "imma bring this to a lyrical demise, im gettin higher than the MUTHAFUCKIN BUDDAFLIES"
that shit is so simple , but it sounded funny and dope to me for some reason lol.
you delivered nicely. you also pronounced butterflies funny.
"i aint trynna play daddy with these little niggas" lol, i like that line too.
mixdown didnt sound too bad, what else do you have to add?

[Late122]

Maybe put those adlibs little lower in the first verse. More echo, sounds like u haven't got it at all. 1st verse would sound way better with echo with those small pauses. I bet u won't be reading this so camelback horse spraygun in shoe.

[KidComet]

Maybe put those adlibs little lower in the first verse. More echo, sounds like u haven't got it at all. 1st verse would sound way better with echo with those small pauses. I bet u won't be reading this so camelback horse spraygun in shoe.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

first dude murdered it wit the flow. i like the beat too it, dope sample, and nice chill oldschool hip hop vybe to it.
the mix sound str8 to me. nice lil hook in there too.
second dude sound like a suburban black dude lol, which isnt a bad thing, i like it.
i myself grew up in the hood, then moved to the suburbs in middle school,
so i probably sound "white" as well by now, since i been out here so long.
nice flow on this.
i like the topics in this, overall cool lil song on some hip hop elitest shit. keep it up.

[Gibbsy]

the beat is dope!!, no doubts sounds like a jmt track, flow and lyrics on the first verse are dope!
the content is alrite but its very boast/hyping track lol not something i like that much tbh...
2nd dude is alrite tooo, first is better lyrically the 1st dude went harder this will deffo sound alot better after its been mixed properly

3.5/5 nice work tho deff on beat choice and flow

[Cli-City]

First rapper killed that shit..I thought that was you...I was like this nigga was trolling all the time..then I read the comments...lyrically he was very strong....Hook was aiight..

Shylo: I fuck with you...if you wasn't such a troll I might be a big supporter of your shit...you can rap..that is a fact...but I can tell you don't take it serious...but this verse was good.....

Really Enjoyed it..