J-Smooth- Ambition (Remix)

[JSmooth]

Track off Only For The Promo 2….check it out…..all feedback welcome!


Ambition- Ambition Freestyle.mp3



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[BlakeJay]

Killed this 4real!..sounds so professional man..you have so much confidence on the mic..delivery is perfect..flow dont never fall off..cant say anything bad about this track..you just do it effortlessly man..major respect!

Lyrics - 5/5
Flow 5/5

Overall 5/5

[Cli-City]

Flow wise this shit is perfect....but lyrically bro..you slacked on this one.....a couple stand out lines but Im used to you going all the way in and my jaws dropping...I felt like you didn't give this one your all...glad to hear something from you though...

3/5

[BlakeJay]

Flow wise this shit is perfect....but lyrically bro..you slacked on this one.....a couple stand out lines but Im used to you going all the way in and my jaws dropping...I felt like you didn't give this one your all...glad to hear something from you though...

3/5

i feel like he bodied this tbh

[Cli-City]

i feel like he bodied this tbh

He has a couple lines in here where he didn't really say anything spectacular..if you listen to Murder My moment..he had way more punchlines and almost all his bars were jaw dropping...this record had alot of forgettable lines...I guess I just have such a high expectation for dude....

"praying I see my prime
hoping I never peak and they understanding my line"...like that line wasn't wack but it's a regular line...

[Young Corruption]

Lyrics: Pretty dope. I never really heard music from you but damn you've improved a lot since last time i heard you. I liked what you were saying
Flow: like Cli-City said this was pretty much perfect
Overall: Very clean track, quality was good which makes a big difference it listening to tracks. Good job

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

i feel like he bodied this tbh

dude, you riding hard now.
it was decent, but you're probably just a a big fan of him so you think its greater than the average listener.

[JSmooth]

Appreciate the quick feedback guys

cli- yea with this track i wasnt goin in thinking i was gonna drop a ton of punchlines. i wanted to show i could body a track by just bein real and flowin. I think blakejay was lookin at it like that and ur just used to more punchlines. preciate the feedback though i feel where ur comin from

young corruption- preciate the listen man. u should check out some more of my shit if u liked this. im just havin fun when i do these remixes

[BlakeJay]

dude, you riding hard now.
it was decent, but you're probably just a a big fan of him so you think its greater than the average listener.

lol im not a fan..i recognize the talent

besides the fact he aint have no metaphors that made you say "damn!" the track was perfect

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

just took another listen, and is it me or is this guy on drakes penis extra hard?
his entire rap presence is drake if you asked me. its as if he studied drake, and copied everything.
even the filler lines and pauses. his voice is just higher, and not as many dope lines.

[mykill]

I'll be honest, I have never been a J-Smooth fan. I respect of course, but I never can get into your music. I dont know what it is either. Lyrics are there. Delivery is there. Flow is there. I just never really get it. Some people I just dont get into around here...

Even the punches are good, but maybe that's it. Maybe its the constant punches that keep from really getting into it. This is another consistent track from ya. Wordplay is great in this one too. (nod to Wale in a way) I really think you need something to make you "stand out" in the sea of rappers out there. That might be the source of the problem of me getting into it really. You're good, I never knock that, but there's nothing unique about what you're putting out. Cli has his voice, draw, melodic flow - BlakeJay has his unique voice too and his DMV style that adds to his records. I'm trying to figure out what makes you different...hmm...

[JSmooth]

I'll be honest, I have never been a J-Smooth fan. I respect of course, but I never can get into your music. I dont know what it is either. Lyrics are there. Delivery is there. Flow is there. I just never really get it. Some people I just dont get into around here...

Even the punches are good, but maybe that's it. Maybe its the constant punches that keep from really getting into it. This is another consistent track from ya. Wordplay is great in this one too. (nod to Wale in a way) I really think you need something to make you "stand out" in the sea of rappers out there. That might be the source of the problem of me getting into it really. You're good, I never knock that, but there's nothing unique about what you're putting out. Cli has his voice, draw, melodic flow - BlakeJay has his unique voice too and his DMV style that adds to his records. I'm trying to figure out what makes you different...hmm...

i respect the honesty bro, but imo u said cli and blake's voice is what makes them unique so im guessing u think my voice isn't unique? I mean i'm more worried about constantly working on my flow/delivery/lyrics/etc