J-Smooth- Ima Boss (Remix)

[JSmooth]

another track im just havin some fun on before i start True Feelings 2……more punchlines/metaphors in this than my ambition track i put up a few days ago….if u dont follow the NFL u might not catch like half my verse lol….this also features my dude Tragedy on the 1st and 3rd verses


Ima Boss- Ima Boss Freestyle.mp3


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[TupacShaquer]

Dope tragedy is dope too...
Damn your deff top 3 studio rappers in my list.

Wanna hear some original shit on true feelings 2 though.

[JSmooth]

preciate it…and yea its gonna be all original just like the first one and Construction of a Dream…i just do these to have fun and keep puttin shit out

[Cli-City]

Tragedy is cool...His voice is kinda annoying...but the way he flowed on that motherfucker...Gawd Damn!!....he killed the flow....lyrically he wasn't as strong though.(3.5/5)


This is the fucking J Smooth I fuck it...didn't like the first in flight line...but everything else was pure flames.....lyrically the best on this track...but Tragedy got you flow wise.....(4.5/5)

"Try your angel luck, but I got Peyton Manning accuracy"

Fire Track...bro.....when is the tape coming..?

[MC_Crary]

Tragedy had that Ace Hood feel. That's a compliment in my opinion. Liked the intensity, but I'll feed your verse rather than his, because this is your post. See this verse personifies my problem with you tracks. The hangers line, bangers line, language line and two fingers lines were great. Really good punches. And then when you switched to the NFL references you were killing. But then the loud line and digit line and so on were wack ass fuck Completely simple. Anybody simpleton could've come up with those punches. You feel what I'm saying? Consistency man. Very important. You're a really good writer, creative and witty. But I don't know if you're add or lazy. Half way through a verse you usually completely give up. It's sad too because I really enjoyed the way you came in on this and then it just completely feel off. Honest opinion.

[mykill]

This is actually real nice...

Tragedy merc'd that f'n fast flow for reeeealz. What's FNF stand for? "gunsmith in the booth/i be greatin' bangas" was an ILL LINE. A majority of the punches in your verse were definitely legit. All A+ material right there. You guys coulda got more aggressive with the chorus though. For the intensity level of the lyrics your deliveries were kinda tame until Tragedy started rapid firin'. You put such a good verse on here, but Tragedy's delivery/flow/etc just carry this thing and pretty much outshines you.

Overall: 3.8/5

[JSmooth]

always appreciate the feed

Cli-ha its try ur andrew luck(stanford QB) and i had to drop the first in flight line thats my crew man FNF….i figured u would like this one better since it had more punchlines

crary- thanks for the feed bro, but trust me i dont "give up" on verses lol…i see what ur sayin though the punchlines earlier in that verse are better than some of the ones in the end

mykill- FNF stands for first in flight(since we're from north carolina) which is the name of my group

[pgathriller]

oh damn, this is tight -- Tragedy has a dope energy on the track and both of you're vocals are recorded really cleanly; from the first listen, just from an overall perspective, I was diggin you're vibe more just because Tragedy's voice not only sounds like Weezy but it sounds like he's mimicking his style/flow a bit too much (even if it's unintentional) but it's still dope for sure, could just be a bit more genuine or unique; both of you have a dope rhythm in your flow though, didn't catch any lines that were off so you guys definitely have tightly wound flows which is dope cause it just shows you guys know what you're doing

overall the shit bangs!

[Late122]

Listened to this when u dropped this but didn't give feed. I like the adlibs effect. Damn Tradegy goes in. Reminds me of Flow. You got really clean vocals. 'We smoke that loud, don't hear u niggas' I like these punchlines u throw, really fits the beat. The hook is nice, just needs some effects... Tradegy got a crazy ass flow in the last bats shiiiit...