Cli-City - Grew Up Fast

[Cli-City]

Poyo PM'd me and made it seem like I was slipping a little earlier today. So this is the outcome of that message..If I can somehow lease this instrumental so I can get the untagged, I will put the final version of this on "The Corner Store Experiment"...but until then enjoy....

Verse 1

Since a youngin’ man I wanted to ball, so I picked up a balls and I gave it my all
Momma told me life is what you make it, so I made sure I made it
Last as long as the traffic lines at grand central station
See growing up for me was hard, niggas on the corner dealing
Dealing with bitter man or dealing with them west side niggas
that fuck with scales like fisher men
the only damn thing given, was I don’t give a damn..
niggas knew the consequence of fucking with that white rock
but we wanted to rock them state property jeans with some white air force ones
that louie belt and some nike socks
so at night time we hustled at the light stop
I think I grew up fast
But then I realized I screw up faster
My grades fell started to screw up class
Stop selling that dope…I said do what pastor?

That was my dad
He was just looking out for a nigga
Was all I had
God bless him

That was my mom
She was just looking out for a nigga
Was all I had
God bless her





Verse 2
Now Im grown I look at life through a different lens
Thinking bout my credit, everyday in a different benz
All my old niggas, surrounded by prison cells
I ask the lord why me?
I guess I had a different drive, better type of piston rings
Plus I was the only one, that fathom even listening
So this corner store experiment
It aint some new shit that won’t understand
but upon hearing it you might be confused but that’s my life is a nutshell
exposing the good the bad and the ugly oh well
Trying to find myself in a complexed world
Navigation stopped working all I see the road
So we look back on the past and then we realize
We just had to look within that is where the real lies
Open up those carbonated looking steal eyes
Wipe that catarac away now I feel fine

Hook
That was my dad
He was just looking out for a nigga
Was all I had
God bless him

That was my mom
She was just looking out for a nigga
Was all I had
God bless her

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[JSmooth]

flow- 4/5 nice smooth flow throughout went right along with the beat
lyrics- 3.5/5 u were spittin real shit, nice song to vibe to, but nothin stood out
overall- 3.9/5 nice chill song to vibe to, seems like a song that gets better with more listens

[Mr. Swag]

I don't know what the dude over me means, I think it was lyrically dope, not like no line stood out, more like all lines fitted and matched each other perfectly.
Flow was nice too, I heard better from you tho
Overall it was a good idea to post something new, you didn't really create any buzz these last weeks... Great choice of which track you presented

btw, what about these features you did? you sittin on em long bro

[Cli-City]

I don't know what the dude over me means, I think it was lyrically dope, not like no line stood out, more like all lines fitted and matched each other perfectly.
Flow was nice too, I heard better from you tho
Overall it was a good idea to post something new, you didn't really create any buzz these last weeks... Great choice of which track you presented

btw, what about these features you did? you sittin on em long bro

Wait until you hear them though bro.....this week for sure...Positive...I'm horrible with getting features done though....Gibbsy realeased a feature today because I took too long to re record....but Im trying....this week I got you though....they're finished though....both dope..

[mykill]

ill release a Cli-City feature tomorrow if this thread gets 5 more feedbacks. go go.

[Cli-City]

ill release a Cli-City feature tomorrow if this thread gets 5 more feedbacks. go go.

PM me that mixed version bro...and imma need you to release that regardless of the feedback..lol

[mykill]

done and done

[Mr. Swag]

Wait until you hear them though bro.....this week for sure...Positive...I'm horrible with getting features done though....Gibbsy realeased a feature today because I took too long to re record....but Im trying....this week I got you though....they're finished though....both dope..

It's cool, just wanted an update

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

done and done

Is it the song i was sposed to be on?

[Cli-City]

Is it the song i was sposed to be on?

Nah a different shit...but its 10x doper

[Syko]

but upon hearing it you might be confused but that’s my life is a nutshell
exposing the good the bad and the ugly oh well
Trying to find myself in a complexed world
Navigation stopped working all I see the road
So we look back on the past and then we realize
We just had to look within that is where the real lies
Open up those carbonated looking steal eyes
Wipe that catarac away now I feel fine

[Cli-City]

Mr Swag lowkey fucking with this heavy