fire brotha ... the vibe of this track was the groundwork and you rode it perfectly and the lyrics were right there with the vibe as well, the hook and verses were dope, stay on your grind fam!
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Damn this tape is going to outshine my shit -.- Then again most people here would.
Anyways, I like how you did the ABAB Rhyming sceme sounded really smooth overall. Lyrics were fucking incredible, your one of the best lyricists here.
The hook was decent, nothing special, wasn't really that catchy tbh .
Overall 3/5The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels
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damn good song. and i love dat sample.
DAVID RUFFIN - (IF LOVING YOU IS WRONG) I DON'T WANT TO BE RIGHT (1973) - YouTube
i got a beat with the same sample, but its different.
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Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Postdamn good song. and i love dat sample.
DAVID RUFFIN - (IF LOVING YOU IS WRONG) I DON'T WANT TO BE RIGHT (1973) - YouTube
i got a beat with the same sample, but its different.
when the mixtape done???
Coming soon bro..sometime in late summer....I have about 3 solid tracks..and playing around with about 6 more...I either have them half done or 3/4 done..Mississippi x California x North Carolina
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Mixed very well imo. The flow was nice on this and went very well with the beat. Delivery was perfect for this beat, just some parts of words cuz have been said different to make it sound better. All in all the is dope! Lyrics are good as well too, very real.
4.5/5
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This beat is nice man. Fit the feel of the lyrics. Hate that tag though lol. Even though its just at the beginning and end it throws everything off lol, I see why you wanna lease it. Heartfelt lyrics man. I can relate my nigga. You're one of the best around here at doing tracks like this. The lyrics were technically sound as far as multis and composition go and you still brought a story with it. That hook was a little weird though. Only the effects, sounded like that underwater effect that the beat kinda has. It might just be the beat. The speakers I listened to this one are kinda weird. All in all, good track though man. Can't wait for that CSE.
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Originally posted by MC_Crary View PostThis beat is nice man. Fit the feel of the lyrics. Hate that tag though lol. Even though its just at the beginning and end it throws everything off lol, I see why you wanna lease it. Heartfelt lyrics man. I can relate my nigga. You're one of the best around here at doing tracks like this. The lyrics were technically sound as far as multis and composition go and you still brought a story with it. That hook was a little weird though. Only the effects, sounded like that underwater effect that the beat kinda has. It might just be the beat. The speakers I listened to this one are kinda weird. All in all, good track though man. Can't wait for that CSE.Mississippi x California x North Carolina
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