J-Smooth- You Can Do Better (feat Tragedy)

[JSmooth]

Track off a mixtape me and Tragedy released called Wright Brothers im on the 1st verse and hook….as always any and all feed welcome


You Can Do Better- 12 You Can Do Better.mp3


Feedback:
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[lilweezyfan]

your flow is dope, the hook is very cool blee dat ey ey brrr

beat: 3/5
flow: 4/5
lyrics: I dont pay attention to the lyrics brrr ey ey

[Cli-City]

Don't really like this instrumental...but yall murdered that shit.....

J Smooth..honestly dude you always murder your verse.......1st part of the hook sounds kinda wack...but the "You can do better" part is dope..very drake like...

Tragedy..Im really starting to like dude...other than his voice he is a very good rapper...


Lyrically this one was good.....

When is the promo tape coming..?

[JSmooth]

Don't really like this instrumental...but yall murdered that shit.....

J Smooth..honestly dude you always murder your verse.......1st part of the hook sounds kinda wack...but the "You can do better" part is dope..very drake like...

Tragedy..Im really starting to like dude...other than his voice he is a very good rapper...


Lyrically this one was good.....

When is the promo tape coming..?

thanks for the listen/feed cli and yea ive got a whole project with tragedy so i might post a few of the tracks...

i posted a link to the tape in my last comment on my Riot remix

[mykill]

This track reminds me a lot of Marvin's Room (at least the hook reminds me of that song). Beat is good. You two both spit really well on this. Lyrically things are solid, and you both put some personal stuff in the bars and it works out well. This is probably one of my Top 3 favorite JSmooth songs. True story.

[JSmooth]

This track reminds me a lot of Marvin's Room (at least the hook reminds me of that song). Beat is good. You two both spit really well on this. Lyrically things are solid, and you both put some personal stuff in the bars and it works out well. This is probably one of my Top 3 favorite JSmooth songs. True story.

top 3 damn didnt expect that. thanks for the feed

[broc717]

FIRE lyrics! good shit fam, keep on ya grind!

[KidComet]

I never had nothing bad to say about your shit honestly. You sound like a pro, so its hard to critique.

You are really good. Like you have a perfect voice for rapping.

I give this track a 5/5. Cause honestly I don't see anythign wrong with it.

Im not trying to give lazy feedback, its just that I think of you as a pro. Like when I listen to wayne's songs and shit, I don't rate it and say oh he shouldve done this blah blah, his flow was a little off blah blah. Like its just perfect the way it is, and thats how I see ur music, No dick riding tho