MYKILL - When I'm On ft. Cli-City

[mykill]

I got Renegaded.



Produced by Superstar O



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[Cli-City]

"Dreams of living lavish, luxurious living habits"

When I'm On..

This is mixtape/album material.....TBH

[wayniac number1]

this shit is Dope, sound like a proffesional single

[MC_Crary]

Not really a fan of the beat. Superstar O is usually hit or miss for me. The concept was good, a well known concept in hip hop music but you made it tour iwn. I really liked the hook, Ive always enjoyed your singing but I think you mixed it better on this one. Sometimes the volume on those parts are kinda weird to me or he background vocals will be too high. Like youre trying to hide the singing lol. Didn't think that on this one. Believe in yourself man you're so much better than you think. I liked your first verse better than the second, seemes like you were just trying to finish the track on the second, get it done you feel me? Liked that Eli Roth line. Lyrically you didnt have to go hard on this type of track, but you stuck to the idea. Cli killed his verse. Had some nice lines. Good to know y'all are working.

[mykill]

Not really a fan of the beat. Superstar O is usually hit or miss for me. The concept was good, a well known concept in hip hop music but you made it tour iwn. I really liked the hook, Ive always enjoyed your singing but I think you mixed it better on this one. Sometimes the volume on those parts are kinda weird to me or he background vocals will be too high. Like youre trying to hide the singing lol. Didn't think that on this one. Believe in yourself man you're so much better than you think. I liked your first verse better than the second, seemes like you were just trying to finish the track on the second, get it done you feel me? Liked that Eli Roth line. Lyrically you didnt have to go hard on this type of track, but you stuck to the idea. Cli killed his verse. Had some nice lines. Good to know y'all are working.

thanks fam. That's actually a reworked 2nd verse. I didnt like the original. good feeds yo.

[TupacShaquer]

Damn your singing >>>

[BlakeJay]

my nigga my killa..your hooks always sick..i loved the way you delivered your first verse..pretty good lyrically as well..a few stand out lines that i liked..like i said the hook is sick like always..love Cli's verse.."you would just be wastin' gas tryna cross City"..love that line..that Corner Store Experiment gon be a problem..i actually like how My killa delivered the last verse..it was just a "chill" way to end the track off as opposed to the aggressive way he came in on his first verse

[mykill]

the feel of this track reminds me of the track "Epic" I did for my "Life and Times of Mykil McFly" tape. thanx for the listens ppl

[broc717]

everytime I leave and come back to this forum everyone gets better and better I fuck with the beat and both of your lyrics, keep on ya grind!

[wayniac number1]

is there a dl -link for this , or will this be a single??

man its so dope when you start rapping in the hook together with the singing

[mykill]

I'll post a download link later tonight for ya

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

why dont you turn the soundcloud download feature on?

then all we have to do is hit the button under "info" on the soundcloud player