MYKILL - Whoa Derr

[mykill]

Damn choppy flow. Ah well..



Produced by Flawless Tracks



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[ATLien666]

First off, that beat is fucking nuts, sheesh.

Flow - You rode the beat well, I think you slipped up once or twice, but it wasn't really noticeable because this beat has a million and one transitions. With that being said, it would've been a little more interesting if you switched the flow up some. I think the verse one was 1000x better than the second one. 3.8/5

Lyrics -You had some lines that really shined, "the game squeezed me out, already know I'm the shit." Idk why, but this kinda sounded like a throwaway track. Like, you would put this on a mixtape to hit a certain song quota. Lyrically, you can do so much better than this. Not saying it was bad, but it wasn't up to your standards. 3.5/5

Other - Really like the chorus and the beat, though. You really know how to bring a song together which is a great specialty to have.

Overall - 4/5

[mykill]

thanks bru! you check out THIS SONG as well?

[Syko]

Beat is fucking ill, and Mykill sprayed bullets all over it.

[Cli-City]

Couldn't describe this any better than Darkaveli did....this shit is fucking nuts...

[broc717]

that beat is straight bonkers! I fuck with the hook heavy, its so catchy, the verses were on point too, great mixing and mastering too! Keep on your grind!

[TupacShaquer]

Damn where you master this shit at? Everything sounds perfect damn .

The flow seems better then last time. I mean your flow was always fine, just this time I didn't hear all those words in one line like last time. Except that market line around 1:00, seemed off , I'm pointing that out for no reason lol.
But yeah the lyrics were okay, kinda expected more from you since your an amazing lyricist .

Overall 3/5 , wanna hear some more singing hooks from you .

[mykill]

Thanks for the feedback maine...

...that cover i made for this will put yo eye out lol

[MC_Crary]

LMIxMMG GET WIT IT OR GET HIT

[YUNG DIEZEL]

whoa derr big sean...... i mean mykill

nah but you should promo this hard.
the whole "whoa derr" as a song concept hasnt been done yet, you should get this out there, the "whoa derr" shit is catchy.

[Cli-City]

Dude the music you have been dropping as of late is so fucking dope......this shit is a fucking problem...

[mykill]

Dude the music you have been dropping as of late is so fucking dope......this shit is a fucking problem...

I think it has a lot to do with the creative space I'm in right now. Last night I was just writing hook after hook, took one song and reworked all the verses for it and then looked at it like "damn, did I just write that?" lol. That's just my point of view, and someone will prolly say "lyrics are ok" but its catchy to me.

---------- Post added at 09:24 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:23 AM ----------

whoa derr big sean...... i mean mykill

nah but you should promo this hard.
the whole "whoa derr" as a song concept hasnt been done yet, you should get this out there, the "whoa derr" shit is catchy.

lol, someone on here once told me I sounded like him with the beats that I rap on. Big Sean is a influence, I'm not gonna lie. I wonder how bad G.O.O.D. music and Sean would sue me though if I promoted it for using one of his catch phrases lol