J-Smooth- Old Dreams (C.O.A.D.)

[JSmooth]

A track off of my Construction of A Dream tape i released a few months back (go download/listen if u havent already)….feedback appreciated…..my True Feelings 2 still coming in June




Old Dreams- 03 Old Dreams.mp3




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[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Went in bro... update your twitter in your sig

[TupacShaquer]

I remember hearing this already from your tape. Everything about you is fucking dope, when you blow up don't forget about us

Anyways,
your flow is fucking crazy. After :45, damn everything sounded like it was coming out naturally. Lyrics are fire "Made a promise to my fam and quitters just dont make em proud"

This Hook >>>>>

This shit sounds mad professional, can't wait to hear your next tape bro.

5/5 for me

[JSmooth]

Poyo- updated the twitter in the sig

Tupac- thanks for the feedback bruh! glad u liked that shit…i dont even compare my next project to this one. True Feelings 2 is gonna kill this

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

this is actually really good. lyrics, and chorus are good. but im not feeling it for some reason

[Gibbsy]

this is hella tight man!!, flow is sick and the lyrics are fire...cant say anything bad about it at all...

5/5

[Cli-City]

Heard this on your tape.....Love it then and love it now....Man it's so hard to rate your shit..because you perform at such a high level....Honestly if you ever make it in the industry you got a fan....Lyrics were fire...normal Smooth fire....your best component is your flow...and your ability to hold a melody..very important to be able to sing some of your hooks.....dope shit...

[JSmooth]

lilchukie- what's keepin u from feelin it?

gibbsy- preciate the feed bro, nice to here positives about ur hard work

cli- thanks for the feed as always…im really workin hard on this next project so im hopin to see some results from it

[BlakeJay]

feel like i say this on all your tracks but, this sounds so professional..loved the way you came in on the first verse with the flow..had many stand out lines that i liked in the first and second verse..hook is fire..i dont always like your singing (like the song you put up before singing "you can do better"..i didnt like that one too much) But i love the singing on this one..like how you came in with a different flow on the second verse as well, very important to switch the flows up from time to time..Nothing bad to say about this one cuzo

[Darkdevilr]

Sounds like something I'd hear from a proffesional rapper 4/5 , I actually liked the hook but I feel like you could've done better on half of the hook (melody). overall 4/5, you're dope! im jelly

[JSmooth]

Sounds like something I'd hear from a proffesional rapper 4/5 , I actually liked the hook but I feel like you could've done better on half of the hook (melody). overall 4/5, you're dope! im jelly

preciate that. r u new? dont remember seein ur name before