Mac- Kiss My Ring [Unfinished]

[DeezyMac]

I was tired of not making music. Just something quick I tossed together. Only a verse thoo, still feeling rusty. Not sure how all this new markup shit works with adding images and embedding soundcloud widgets, so my apologies if it doesn't come out right.

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[mOta^]

ya flow is dope, u could always doo without the autotune though, A&R's wont take you seriously the minute they hear it, i fux wit this shit tho, u should def make a video to this shit, flow is ill, ya delivery is ill and ya quality is ill too, good shit fam

[IN10SION]

Hot beat and your flow is dope. I dont like the extreme autotune in the beginning before you start to rap, dont get me wrong i like this song but the autotune in the beginning sounds not serious.
But on the verse and hook i really like the sound of your voice and it fits the beat perfectly.
I really like this one

[DeezyMac]

Appreciate the feed. The only reason I threw autotune on at the beginning is because the beat reminded me of Flight School, and that jawn was autotuned to death. Lol.

[MC_Crary]

Is this an original hook? I liked it. Better than half the shit on the radio lol. Not a fan of the autorune, but you gotta do what's best for you. Solid track though, good to have some new music from you.

[DatWeezy]

this shit dope tho for real!

Beat was tight AF !!!

Flow was pretty damn good and the lyrics were decent to my dude!

The hook was pretty cool to, I could def bump to this, but I want the finished version first!

Keep up man 3.5/5

[JSmooth]

flow was dope 4/5
lyrics were just average imo but delivery was nice 3.5/5
overall- 3.5/5 probably higher once its finished and u mess with that autotune in the beginning

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

where you from bro? you have a baltimore accent

[DeezyMac]

^ didn't know we had accents lol but yessir, i'm from bmore.

Thanks everybody. And yeah MC, original hook. All my hooks are usually lines in other songs that I turn into a chorus. Lol, since I suck at hooks, it's the laziest, simplest way for me.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

^ didn't know we had accents lol but yessir, i'm from bmore.

aha, i knew it. its very subtle , but its the way you guys pernounce certain words.
if you heard of this rapper los, which im sure you have, he says some words the same way you do with the baltimore accent, and i heard another dude from baltimore say stuff the same as well.
you probably dont realize it though because you're so accustomed to it.

[Cli-City]

Best flow in the studio is back...wish you didn't have that auto tune though....I didn't like this that much...but a average song from you is better than nothing.....man that fucking flow >>>>> I hope your back for good..

[Laudacity93]

Good Job bruh i dig the flow and beat but yeah the autotune in the beginning ehh do you tho.