I feel I try to give you much harder feedback than most because you are really good and have the potential to be great. I liked this song though. The beat hits hard but in a very subtle way. Gives you room to work all over it. You're delivery goes will with this, you switch from laid back to aggressive effortlessly. The lyrics were dope, didn't feel like you slipped in this one. You're much better coming from the heart than brag rapping. Good song man, keep coming with stuff like this.
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Originally posted by MC_Crary View PostI feel I try to give you much harder feedback than most because you are really good and have the potential to be great. I liked this song though. The beat hits hard but in a very subtle way. Gives you room to work all over it. You're delivery goes will with this, you switch from laid back to aggressive effortlessly. The lyrics were dope, didn't feel like you slipped in this one. You're much better coming from the heart than brag rapping. Good song man, keep coming with stuff like this.ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3
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I really fuck with this, you do really remind me of J-Cole, though.
Flow - 4/5
Lyrics - 4.5/5 (You had some really deep shit here, especially some shit that a listener wouldn't catch on the first time. You have a lot of subtle punchlines which is dope.)
Other - I do feel like if your whole mixtape was filled with songs like this, it would get repetitive quick.
Overall - 4.5/5
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Bro I'm like a straight fan, u dope as fuck, please tell me what u use to record, like what programme do u use, what mic. Do u record in a studio or just like a mini home studioHip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
So Just Call Me....
"Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"
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i like the based feel in da beginnin
Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View PostBro I'm like a straight fan, u dope as fuck, please tell me what u use to record, like what programme do u use, what mic. Do u record in a studio or just like a mini home studio
if not , sound like it could be at a studio. shit sound real clear.Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 05-21-2012, 12:57 AM.CHECK OUT MY SOUNDCLICK PAGE BELOW:
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Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View PostBro I'm like a straight fan, u dope as fuck, please tell me what u use to record, like what programme do u use, what mic. Do u record in a studio or just like a mini home studioONLY FOR THE PROMO 3
ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150
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