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  • Checkmate The Gr8 - Lane Switch (Feat. Livesosa) (Prod. By Cardo)

    NEW MUSIC!!! Dope beat + Dope hook + Real Lyrics = Lane Switch




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  • #2
    You can hear the southern influence in your music. I liked the hook, pretty catchy though at some points I kinda miss what he's saying. You rode the beat all the way through, lyrics were to the point, and on I subject I can feel. Sounds like you're just talking about what happened last night, ya know. Mixing sounds pretty good, studio quality. Much better than most of us around here. I could hear this track on the radio man. I'd like to see you posting more man, you songs are always really good. You could probably give some good tips to the up and coming guys around here too.

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    • #3
      Sounds like B.O.B. singing the hook. Beat is great! Mastering is great as always. I likes the verses but sometimes there was a sense of your losing the slight intensity in your delivery. Flow was great though.

      How's the grind goin' with you check? You doing shows now and shit? (more than likely) Talking to labels?

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      • #4
        Talking the beginning was annoying....your boy who did the hook is dope as fuck..

        The beat is smooth as fuck.....Always loved your music...you usually sound like Tip but this is the first time I have to say different...but damn you did your damn thing....lyrically excellent....flow is incredible and a overall great record....

        4.5/5....You have any new project coming???
        Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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        • #5
          Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
          You can hear the southern influence in your music. I liked the hook, pretty catchy though at some points I kinda miss what he's saying. You rode the beat all the way through, lyrics were to the point, and on I subject I can feel. Sounds like you're just talking about what happened last night, ya know. Mixing sounds pretty good, studio quality. Much better than most of us around here. I could hear this track on the radio man. I'd like to see you posting more man, you songs are always really good. You could probably give some good tips to the up and coming guys around here too.
          Lol you hear the southern influence in my music cause I'm from the South...Miami-Dade County to be exact I appreciate the feedback I lost 1 of my closet homies earlier this year so I'm just gettin back on track wit the music so I'ma be posting more music and gettin back involved wit the forum cause its alot of dope artist dat just needs honest feedback not just ppl tellin their songs sound good just so they can post their song

          ---------- Post added at 04:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:36 PM ----------

          Originally posted by mykill View Post
          Sounds like B.O.B. singing the hook. Beat is great! Mastering is great as always. I likes the verses but sometimes there was a sense of your losing the slight intensity in your delivery. Flow was great though.

          How's the grind goin' with you check? You doing shows now and shit? (more than likely) Talking to labels?
          Thanks for the feedback I fucks wit ur music so I be lookin forward to ur feedback the grind is goin gr8 gettin luv No labels but I got a chance to get in the studio wit Drumma Boy I let him hear some songs and he fuks wit me but other den dat I been underground workn on sum new shit

          ---------- Post added at 04:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:40 PM ----------

          Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
          Talking the beginning was annoying....your boy who did the hook is dope as fuck..

          The beat is smooth as fuck.....Always loved your music...you usually sound like Tip but this is the first time I have to say different...but damn you did your damn thing....lyrically excellent....flow is incredible and a overall great record....

          4.5/5....You have any new project coming???
          LOL preciate the feedback yea I'm workin on sum new shit...4th Of July AS2:Rise Of The Apes


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          • #6
            I think this might be the first song ive heard from you…i listen to southern influenced music a lot so this was nice to hear…anyway no slips in the flow u were on the beat the whole time and sounded good…lyrics were pretty solid throughout cant complain but nothing i went crazy over…track was dope though id say 4.2/5
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            • #7
              Thanks for the feedback bro! this is ur 1st time checkn out my music?! #stopsleepin

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              • #8
                #stopsleepin

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