J- Smooth- Im On (Remix)

[JSmooth]

forgot to post this one from my only for the promo 2 tape….1st verse is my dude ray ellis…2nd verse is Tragedy(been on a few songs ive posted)…3rd verse is Jarren Johnson(was on that stay with me joint i posted a while back)….4th verse is urs truly…..feedback appreciated


Im On- 11 Im On Freestyle.mp3


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[mykill]

Ray Ellis: Take 23? lol, that a MJ reference?... very intimate verse, allusions to death and touching slighting on some God and religious elements brings out the character of the verse that's
Tragedy: Trag came in kind of weak imo. For once, he didnt take all the attention from the other people on the track.
Jarren Johnson: Great flow, good delivery.
JSmooth: Great verse. Good punches and good energy. Your intensity is always perfect for whatever track you're on.

This has a very "spiritual" feeling to it. Great song. You guys did a fantastic job on this one.
Overall: 4.3/5

[oSkimp]

you guys got radio voices.
that is the main thing i look for in music
then the beat which is also crazy.
very fucking nice my dude! 5/5

ill look for more posts of you.

[cGrumm]

Very well done! Yeah your voices are good. The flow, delivery and mix is good. Does sound radio quality. Some lines stuck out, but wasn't like "OH DAMN!!!" the whole time. Its nice though, id bump to it.
4.75/5

[JSmooth]

thanks for the feedback so far…myk- thanks for reviewing every verse. i told them what u said….skimp and cgrumm thanks for the feed and im glad yall were feelin it

[akkucc]

Good Song, all of guys got good voices and good flow.

First guy:- good flow, good lyrics enjoyable but not that much so 4/5

Second guy:- first your voice and flow sounds like weezy, i like it bro, but you little fell off in the end starting was best.. 4.2/5

Third guy:- Good flow, not much to say but it is cool. 4/5

Fourth guy:- nice switches and nice flow, when you rap fast you went little off i think but it is good all over. 4.1/5

Overall nice track enjoyed it.. Good luck!!

[lilweezyfan]

its so smooth, but i was off but you was on..
Dope tho
ey ey

[wayniac number1]

all of yall killed it.....and everybody of you have dope voices lol

[JSmooth]

all of yall killed it.....and everybody of you have dope voices lol

ive got some more songs w/ these guys i might post

[MC_Crary]

Was happy to hear Tragedy come on. The first guys were ok, but he always brings that heat to the track. His opening lines were great " niggas rappin bout the expensive linen and the birds they drop in the kitchen but not thankful for what they gettin" Sick. Liked your flow on this. Your aggressive flow is always a killer to me. I feel like I've heard you say something about niggas can't see eye to eye with you alot. Starting to get kinda reptitive. You had some great lines though. Really liked this from you dude. Good track.