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Akkucc Fever of Love Feat PoYo(Mixed by Purpen)

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  • #13
    I can tell you put emotion into this track. The obvious negatives are there that people will mention...but I think this is the best track you ever released...actually took thought....i didn't really like Poyo's verse that much...didn't flow well with the concept...wish he took the position of missing him girls making him literally sick....or something like that...But overall a great track...

    ---------- Post added at 12:39 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:36 AM ----------

    Listened again...Poyos verse is better than I thought..
    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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    • #14
      i like the singing, it shows emotions better. good song.
      poyo's verse seemed sorta rushed, and flow was sorta off too. he shoulda took his time with that one.

      YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • #15
        Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
        I can tell you put emotion into this track. The obvious negatives are there that people will mention...but I think this is the best track you ever released...actually took thought....i didn't really like Poyo's verse that much...didn't flow well with the concept...wish he took the position of missing him girls making him literally sick....or something like that...But overall a great track...

        ---------- Post added at 12:39 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:36 AM ----------

        Listened again...Poyos verse is better than I thought..

        i thought the verse fit the song concept

        @lilchukieforeheadbig
        i admit the verse only took me like 20 minutes but thats about my average for most verses, its kinda hard to go IN & tell a story on only 8 bars i tried to just add to the quality to the song which i hope i did
        twitter.com/basedpoyo

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        • #16
          Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
          i thought the verse fit the song concept

          @lilchukieforeheadbig
          i admit the verse only took me like 20 minutes but thats about my average for most verses, its kinda hard to go IN & tell a story on only 8 bars i tried to just add to the quality to the song which i hope i did
          I just thought you could've mentioned fever and being love sick instead of pills (and drugs at that)...but it was good enough....for a 15 min verse is did what it had to do...
          Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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          • #17
            Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
            I just thought you could've mentioned fever and being love sick instead of pills (and drugs at that)...but it was good enough....for a 15 min verse is did what it had to do...
            Lemme go rap genius on ya bitchass lol
            lyrics:
            40 oz and a fat blunt lookin back damn girl i fucked up and thats a tough pill to swallow so i pop a coulpe zannies to ease the the sorroww if i go to sleep will i see tomorrow i dont really know if i even want to without you there no me so i pop some more pills till i od

            i pictured myself alone in the house depressed thinking bout a girl i lost. drinking (in the chorus it says "im so crazy drunk")/smoking/pill popping to cover the pain of losing her. i get to the point where i dont even want to live if i dont she's in my life so purposely overdose (suicide)
            twitter.com/basedpoyo

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            • #18
              Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
              Lemme go rap genius on ya bitchass lol
              lyrics:
              40 oz and a fat blunt lookin back damn girl i fucked up and thats a tough pill to swallow so i pop a coulpe zannies to ease the the sorroww if i go to sleep will i see tomorrow i dont really know if i even want to without you there no me so i pop some more pills till i od

              i pictured myself alone in the house depressed thinking bout a girl i lost. drinking (in the chorus it says "im so crazy drunk")/smoking/pill popping to cover the pain of losing her. i get to the point where i dont even want to live if i dont she's in my life so purposely overdose (suicide)
              The verse is good bro....just thought you could've mentioned fever..everybody else like it..don't trip off of one comment..LOL!
              Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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              • #19
                Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                i like the singing, it shows emotions better. good song.
                poyo's verse seemed sorta rushed, and flow was sorta off too. he shoulda took his time with that one.
                Hey thanks bro, And i think Poyo did good job on this song..

                ---------- Post added at 12:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:43 PM ----------

                Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
                Lemme go rap genius on ya bitchass lol
                lyrics:
                40 oz and a fat blunt lookin back damn girl i fucked up and thats a tough pill to swallow so i pop a coulpe zannies to ease the the sorroww if i go to sleep will i see tomorrow i dont really know if i even want to without you there no me so i pop some more pills till i od

                i pictured myself alone in the house depressed thinking bout a girl i lost. drinking (in the chorus it says "im so crazy drunk")/smoking/pill popping to cover the pain of losing her. i get to the point where i dont even want to live if i dont she's in my life so purposely overdose (suicide)
                Hey bro what is the meaning of OD??

                ---------- Post added at 12:45 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:44 PM ----------

                Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                I can tell you put emotion into this track. The obvious negatives are there that people will mention...but I think this is the best track you ever released...actually took thought....i didn't really like Poyo's verse that much...didn't flow well with the concept...wish he took the position of missing him girls making him literally sick....or something like that...But overall a great track...

                ---------- Post added at 12:39 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:36 AM ----------

                Listened again...Poyos verse is better than I thought..
                Thanks bro..

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                • #20
                  OD = Over Dose
                  Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                  • #21
                    Bumping it want some more feeds..

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                    • #22
                      Akkucc had some nice verses, your improving in your english because I can understand a little more of what your saying, still some shit that passes by that I'll probably never get because of your accent but its getting better
                      The hook, eh , i wasn't feeling it. I felt like it didn't fit well or maybe it just wasnt mixed properly idk

                      Poyo did decent, not doing much feedback for him since he only had like 8 bars.
                      The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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