10 A.M. Freestlye (Lil Trev) - HKC

[DatWeezy]

Here is a single verse from me I did the other morning.. Some is a true freestyle and some has been wrote before I just threw em in there..

Didn't really take this one to serious, but I do want an opinion...

Started recording this at like 8 AM so i was tired as fuck haha.. but anyways...


trevfree1.mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform


Feed 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post872228

Feed 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post872219

[JAYRMe]

I actually fuck with this track. The intro needs to be cut a little you say I'm just gonna go and the beat plays for another 10 seconds lol

Beat 4/5
Lyrics 3/5 nothing really special but pretty good for a freestyle.
Flow 3.5/5 You rode the beat well I would like to see you switch it up a little bit but still good.

Overall 3.5/5

[DatWeezy]

thanks for the feed my man!

[cGrumm]

Damn, I didnt think i was gonna feel this, but this was nice as hell. I liked the punchlines you used, a lot of them stood out. The beat helped this out a lot, personally i like hard beats with a lot of bass, and your delivery and attitude fit perfectly with it. Mixing sounded good, but i co-sign the intro +thought it shoulda been longer. But all in all this is one(out of a handlefull) of the best tracks i heard on here bro!
4.5/5

[DatWeezy]

thanks my man for the feed! I realize now that I fucked up the intro haha but fuck it.

I might re record this and throw another one of my dudes on it for the tape honestly.. But glad you like it, good lookin.

[cGrumm]

what beat is it btw?

[DatWeezy]

Honestly, I have no idea. Found it on YouTube a while back and just now used it lol

[cGrumm]

should def send me it so we can do something on this!

[mykill]

I thought I posted on this last night... hmm...

You notice how you say "I'm just gonna go..." then there's a big blank of silence for a few seconds after that... lol. I thought you were about to rip it, but instead there was silence. Trev, I always thought you had the best flow outta your HKC brothas. This was a pretty legit freestyle. Dont know what's going on with the twitter and girls hitting you up comment though...

Overall: 4.2/5, Too short. Go in another 16 bars with this

[DatWeezy]

Thanks for the feed mykill. Imma def fuck with this some more and write another verse to it. The silence thing was just a fuck up and I was tired, imma make sure that is fixed to lol.

The twitter and girl thing is kind of only something people from around my area would know... -- Basically, I hate this bitch is what it comes down to lawlzzz..

Cgrumm -- Imma send you the beat here soon. Give me a couple days, but I will send it to you for sure!

[RIOT]

This was actually pretty dope. You have a lot of energy and confidence with your rapping which is good. Good job man.

[DatWeezy]

thanks for the feed man.