Poyo - Sun Come Up (Featuring J- Smooth) *Mixed By Purpen AKA I Got More Hoes Than U*

[mykill]

First few bars were a bit rough on the delivery... Gotta work on that Drake shit my friend lol. Lyrically everything was very fitting and appropriate for the song. You did a great job capturing the feeling of the concept.

Smooth did a great job with the hook, but it needs more backing vocals and better "punch". It sounds pretty dry and empty and some backing vocals and slight singing adlibs would bring it out better and give it better impact on the song.

Overall: 4.3/5, Great track. Good, consistent performances by both artists. Wish there was a third verse from J, but still a great hook and a great track from the both of you. Will we see JSmooth collab with more people around the Stu'? That'd be great!

[JSmooth]

Wish there was a third verse from J, but still a great hook and a great track from the both of you. Will we see JSmooth collab with more people around the Stu'? That'd be great!

Im actually doing a verse from another studio artist right now...

[JAYRMe]

Yeah only bad thing is can say is Poyo work on your delivery a bit and try to do less of that drake ish lol
Agreed with Mykill too the hook is dry, needs that lil something to make it sound more hook-like.

3.5/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Yeah only bad thing is can say is Poyo work on your delivery a bit and try to do less of that drake ish lol
Agreed with Mykill too the hook is dry, needs that lil something to make it sound more hook-like.

3.5/5

I think usually my delivery is top notch have you heard my other songs? And idk why but I just been on my drizzy shit lately lol compared to that Swagged out shit

[JAYRMe]

I think usually my delivery is top notch have you heard my other songs? And idk why but I just been on my drizzy shit lately lol compared to that Swagged out shit

Yeah i heard ya other tracks and i agree but i'm saying on this track specifically there was more parts than usual.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Yeah i heard ya other tracks and i agree but i'm saying on this track specifically there was more parts than usual.

I feel you bruh bruh

[MC_Crary]

Girl I want you back, trampstamp. Funny line lol.

This has that J Smooth sound to it. It's funny that he wasn't your original thought for a hook, cause this seems like a track he would come up with. I like that you're trying something different on this. Still feel like your lyrics are a bit repetitive though. I feel the vibe of this track though. J Smooth put a nice hook on this. I think the effects on it could have been better though. To make it sound more like a hook. To me it only sounds different because of your varying sound qualities. Good effort though Poyo. Be on the lookout for a pm from me.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Churrrrrrrrch

[WeezyFan]

I like it like good food

Flow: 5/5
beat: 4/4
lyrics: 3/5

bitchu ballin lik u Birdman!

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

I like it like good food

Flow: 5/5
beat: 4/4
lyrics: 3/5

bitchu ballin lik u Birdman!

Brrrrrrrrrrrr

[akkucc]

Song is really very good. i love the slow beat and your verses and jsmooth put a great hook.. nice song buddy like it alot..

i will give 4.5/5