J- Smooth Feat. Tragedy- 3 A.M. In My City

[JSmooth]

Like always any feedback is welcome……. I post music and leave feedback AT THE SAME DAMN TIME!….im bout to be saying that till yall get pissed fyi

3 A.M. In my City- 07 3am In My City.mp3



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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

another classic jsmooth track.
that other guy sounds like you lol, he's like a more animated version of you imo.

[Young Mula Fan]

i was listening to this track on datpiff the other day when i was going threw ur construction of a dream tape. This is probably my favourite song by you bro, great song

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

I post music and leave feedback AT THE SAME DAMN TIME!….im bout to be saying that till yall get pissed fyi

yeah i was wondering why you said that in the studio index lol.
why you keep saying it though?

[THA GR8 M8]

There is nothing I could find wrong. I just couldn't really vibe to it tbh. The hook was dope tho.

[JSmooth]

yung mula fan- preciate the feed homie…and hell yea! thats dope its ur favorite song by me

lilchukie- its from the future song, "at the same damn time" lol

[MC_Crary]

First time I've heard a laidback flow from Tragedy. Hook sounds Drake-esque. I don't like the curfew line of it though lol. Seems outta place, who has a curfew anymore and if so why would it be 3am? Definitely not a probation curfew lol. Like the child supporters line in your second verse. This track kind of bored me tbh honest and the end was weird. Don't really like this one man.

[JSmooth]

First time I've heard a laidback flow from Tragedy. Hook sounds Drake-esque. I don't like the curfew line of it though lol. Seems outta place, who has a curfew anymore and if so why would it be 3am? Definitely not a probation curfew lol. Like the child supporters line in your second verse. This track kind of bored me tbh honest and the end was weird. Don't really like this one man.

preciate it. 2 bad u didnt like it but respect the honesty

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

First time I've heard a laidback flow from Tragedy. Hook sounds Drake-esque. I don't like the curfew line of it though lol. Seems outta place, who has a curfew anymore and if so why would it be 3am? Definitely not a probation curfew lol. Like the child supporters line in your second verse. This track kind of bored me tbh honest and the end was weird. Don't really like this one man.

real nigga feedback there^^. honest shit
said what he liked, and and said didnt like, with no dickriding yet no hate.
all you other studio niggas need to take notes we need more real nigga feedbackers.

#realniggafeedback

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First time I've heard a laidback flow from Tragedy. Hook sounds Drake-esque. I don't like the curfew line of it though lol. Seems outta place, who has a curfew anymore and if so why would it be 3am? Definitely not a probation curfew lol. Like the child supporters line in your second verse. This track kind of bored me tbh honest and the end was weird. Don't really like this one man.

imma go on some dumb shit and feedback your feedback.
yes the hook did sound drake esque, jsmooth is a drake type artist actually.
but i think you taking the curfew line too literally.

"curfew around the corner,
niggas schemin on ya,
the after party poppin,
ya girl waitin on ya,
thats just 3 a.m. in my city (x2)
bitches wanna ride,
they just wanna know ya,
when they get inside,
they dont wanna love ya,
thats just 3 a.m. in my city (x2)"

i dont know exactly what he meant by curfew, but based on the other lines after the curfew line,
he could've meant a time him and the girl decide to meet or some shit lol
even if he did mean the time his parents make him be home,
the "curfew around the corner" probably sounded good to jsmooth so he used it,
and the melody he used as the hook sounds dope with that i admit .

but i do agree that the cutoff at the end was weird lmao, shit started skipping , then cutoff and started playing another song.

[JSmooth]

real nigga feedback there^^. honest shit
said what he liked, and and said didnt like, with no dickriding yet no hate.
all you other studio niggas need to take notes we need more real nigga feedbackers.

#realniggafeedback

---------- Post added at 06:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:03 PM ----------



imma go on some dumb shit and feedback your feedback.
yes the hook did sound drake esque, jsmooth is a drake type artist actually.
but i think you taking the curfew line too literally.

"curfew around the corner,
niggas schemin on ya,
the after party poppin,
ya girl waitin on ya,
thats just 3 a.m. in my city (x2)
bitches wanna ride,
they just wanna know ya,
when they get inside,
they dont wanna love ya,
thats just 3 a.m. in my city (x2)"

i dont know exactly what he meant by curfew, but based on the other lines after the curfew line,
he could've meant a time him and the girl decide to meet or some shit lol
even if he did mean the time his parents make him be home,
the "curfew around the corner" probably sounded good to jsmooth so he used it,
and the melody he used as the hook sounds dope with that i admit .

but i do agree that the cutoff at the end was weird lmao, shit started skipping , then cutoff and started playing another song.

feedback on the feedback…i like it ha…anyway yall r just gettin way into that curfew line. it doesnt curfew as in "momma told me to be in by midnight so i gotta bounce" lol its just basically a way of sayin its pretty damn late and most people r back home or going home but not me

[Young Mula Fan]

Bro dont u wanna please do a hook like that for me?

[akkucc]

nice track man i like it.. nice hook nd nice verses. good luck.