J-Smooth- Love (True Feelings 2)

[JSmooth]

I'll have to go with Noble on this. This is a really good song. Some of the notes you sang are kinda flat but other than that it's really good. I could see something like this doing well on the radio, but it would always draw Drake comparisons. You're one of the guys around here with enough talent to actually do this, but originality is what'll get you somewhere. Drake's got this market on lock. When you're really spitting no body can fuck with you but tracks like this are getting redundant. Good luck man.

yea i feel you…i have to have a few tracks like this though for this type of project, so ill just have to have a nice mix of both

[mykill]

Hmmm....


Chorus is bland. I mean its good, and then when the backing vocals kick in it's better, but it just sounds like another verse to me. No differentiation from the verses. Definitely needs some doubling in some parts. Some of the lines in the first verse were too long, need to be tightened.

As far as professional goes, I think this is a great track and another solid effort from you. Does it sound 100% like a radio track? concept wise, it does. Something about the vocals though sound weird... is there reverb on em? True Feelings 2 nonetheless should be a beast...

[JSmooth]

Hmmm....


Chorus is bland. I mean its good, and then when the backing vocals kick in it's better, but it just sounds like another verse to me. No differentiation from the verses. Definitely needs some doubling in some parts. Some of the lines in the first verse were too long, need to be tightened.

As far as professional goes, I think this is a great track and another solid effort from you. Does it sound 100% like a radio track? concept wise, it does. Something about the vocals though sound weird... is there reverb on em? True Feelings 2 nonetheless should be a beast...

preciate the feed bro…u really couldnt tell it was a chorus though?

[mykill]

i mean i knew it was the chorus, but it doesnt sound like a chorus does. it sounds like a verse. there's usually a lot of doubling on choruses in mainstream now, so the naked ear could get confused. just sayin'

[JSmooth]

i mean i knew it was the chorus, but it doesnt sound like a chorus does. it sounds like a verse. there's usually a lot of doubling on choruses in mainstream now, so the naked ear could get confused. just sayin'

alright i feel ya

[KidComet]

Niggas who say anything negative about this shit is just bsing and dont wanna seem like a dick rider,


dawg, u sound like a stright pro with everything.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Agreed.


btw [MENTION=60086]KidComet[/MENTION] why you stop making songs?

[KidComet]

Agreed.


btw @KidComet why you stop making songs?

Im helping my niggas out with their promo and shit, trying to get them recognition, ill post some of their songs.

The way I see it, I wanna be like a lil Cortez Bryant haha. Or be like Birdman

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Im helping my niggas out with their promo and shit, trying to get them recognition, ill post some of their songs.

The way I see it, I wanna be like a lil Cortez Bryant haha. Or be like Birdman

Respect bro, get your grind on just dont be delaying shit like baby and tez lol.

[JSmooth]

Niggas who say anything negative about this shit is just bsing and dont wanna seem like a dick rider,


dawg, u sound like a stright pro with everything.

thanks bro, i appreciate that! im tryin to make True Feelings 2 somethin special….u get ur cortez bryant on though lol. i think u would be good at that shit….might need to throw some promo my way

[KidComet]

thanks bro, i appreciate that! im tryin to make True Feelings 2 somethin special….u get ur cortez bryant on though lol. i think u would be good at that shit….might need to throw some promo my way

if u lived in my city i would be more motivated to do it tbh, but like i wanna promote my own niggas and shit

[TupacShaquer]

Im helping my niggas out with their promo and shit, trying to get them recognition, ill post some of their songs.

The way I see it, I wanna be like a lil Cortez Bryant haha. Or be like Birdman

So your all about the green