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  • Jayrme- No Emotions

    Here's a little preview of my next single "No Emotions" gonna be in the studio this week so just wanted to know what you guys thought of this and what I should switch up before I finalize it.



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    Last edited by JAYRMe; 06-12-2012, 11:07 PM.

  • #2
    First off, you aren't gunna get much feedback on this as you posted audio that can't even be streamed.


    Flow - Pretty good flow. I was vibing to it.
    Lyrics - Decent for the song, nothing really stood out to me lyrics wise though.
    Other - The hook is dope. That autotune on the whole song >>>>>>>>>>
    Overall - 4.5/5. I like this better then that 'Wasted' song.



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    • #3
      Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
      First off, you aren't gunna get much feedback on this as you posted audio that can't even be streamed.


      Flow - Pretty good flow. I was vibing to it.
      Lyrics - Decent for the song, nothing really stood out to me lyrics wise though.
      Other - The hook is dope. That autotune on the whole song >>>>>>>>>>
      Overall - 4.5/5. I like this better then that 'Wasted' song.
      yeah bro make a streaming link
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      • #4
        Streamable Link added. Forget it was a m4a so it couldn't be streamed.


        Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
        First off, you aren't gunna get much feedback on this as you posted audio that can't even be streamed.


        Flow - Pretty good flow. I was vibing to it.
        Lyrics - Decent for the song, nothing really stood out to me lyrics wise though.
        Other - The hook is dope. That autotune on the whole song >>>>>>>>>>
        Overall - 4.5/5. I like this better then that 'Wasted' song.
        Preciate the feedback. How you feel bout the autotune of the verses? was going to take it off on the final version.

        Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
        yeah bro make a streaming link

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        • #5
          Originally posted by JAYRMe View Post
          Preciate the feedback. How you feel bout the autotune of the verses? was going to take it off on the final version.
          It was dope as fuck imo. I've always wondered how people get their autotune sounding like that lol, any tips? I can somewhat get it like that if I'm trying to stay on key and everything, but its hard when rapping a verse. I think the song how it is now is dope. Could use some adlibs on the verses is the only thing I could suggest to you lol, but you might not have any for a reason.



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          • #6
            The autotune is cool on the verses but imo I think you should make it a little more subtle on the tail end of your phrases, and on the hook, it sounds like the autotune was glued to one note and doesn't move at all i.e. the entire hook was just one long tone which was really weird

            overall it's cool but the hook could be greatly improved if the autotune moves in a melody instead of just being one note
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            • #7
              Hook is tooooo dope!!

              Overall the song is pretty good actually and I'm fucking with the autotune!

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              • #8
                Preciate the feedback everyone i'll take everything into account and reply with more questions later, off to work right now.

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                • #9
                  why is this way down there? bump

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
                    It was dope as fuck imo. I've always wondered how people get their autotune sounding like that lol, any tips? I can somewhat get it like that if I'm trying to stay on key and everything, but its hard when rapping a verse. I think the song how it is now is dope. Could use some adlibs on the verses is the only thing I could suggest to you lol, but you might not have any for a reason.
                    I honestly have no idea bro lol i didnt mix this some guy i know did and i was gone when he was mixing so i barely remember what he was doing haha I do remember him looking for my pitch on the hook and then added some kind compression (i think?) on it to give it that effect. As for the verses pretty sure its the same key as the hook because he didnt do much to the verses since it wasnt final

                    Originally posted by mykill View Post
                    why is this way down there? bump
                    #Salute

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                    • #11
                      Not bad. Auto tune kinda got annoying throughout the verses. The hook sounded good with it though. 3/5
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                      • #12
                        AYE YOOOOO... I like yo Flow... You can Do Something big wit that tho... what should work.... i have a Name out here in LA.... so it wouldnt be time wasted... Whats yall Twitters... I'll Follow Back!
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