E-Low - True Spitter

[RIOT]

True Spitter by riotofficial on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Recorded this before my mic went out on me last month. I finished the mixing and everything last night so I figured I'd post it up!

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-emotions.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-marvyste.html

[RIOT]

Any feedback at all? Haha..

[TupacShaquer]

Mixing was pretty bad lol but flow and lyrics were prretty decent. Although at times you fell off, badly , but yeah dope lyrics.

[RIOT]

Mixing was pretty bad lol but flow and lyrics were prretty decent. Although at times you fell off, badly , but yeah dope lyrics.

What part did I fall off at?

[Dj_RobbyDee]

im not expecting you to have the dopest mixing... especially if your not a engineer.. so on that note... Decent song.. koo lyrics... no Wack shit... You on... i fuck wit it...

[RIOT]

im not expecting you to have the dopest mixing... especially if your not a engineer.. so on that note... Decent song.. koo lyrics... no Wack shit... You on... i fuck wit it...

Thanks man, much appreciated

[mykill]

Rhymes are very basic on this. You gotta expand your vocabulary and start looking outside the box with stuff. The concept is pretty good though. You picked a good beat for it. I like how it builds up and your delivery does the same throughout the track. Mixing wasnt too bad, I just think its your mic and you might not be using the best effects. Make sure to pass that stuff through a EQ and Compressor to get the best clarity for your vocals.

Overall: 3.7/5

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

sounds like sentus twin.

[RIOT]

sounds like sentus twin.

I don't know who he is, link me to something he's done.

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Rhymes are very basic on this. You gotta expand your vocabulary and start looking outside the box with stuff. The concept is pretty good though. You picked a good beat for it. I like how it builds up and your delivery does the same throughout the track. Mixing wasnt too bad, I just think its your mic and you might not be using the best effects. Make sure to pass that stuff through a EQ and Compressor to get the best clarity for your vocals.

Overall: 3.7/5

Thanks for the advice, I'll expand my vocabulary more for sure and work on mixing and mastering.

[RIOT]

sounds like sentus twin.

Damn, I just looked him up and we DO sound alike hahah. Thats crazy..