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Hello, i've just started rapping and i wanted your views on what i did the sound quality is bad cause i recoded it with my built in microphone of my macbook air.
Since i'm french most of the work is to rap how it sounds in my head, but i think the lyrics are pretty kewl. So many this dont flow as well as i want them to be, by coming here i want to know if its worth training my rapping skills or not.
http://soundcloud.com/adelxoxo-1/2-january
Here are the lyrics:
2 janvier
life is a cigarette, andwe all try to make it last
yet we let our life dropbehind us
Ashes are nothing but past
and people that arentkind to us
Cauqe we we were born wayto fast
or like they say fuckingcrazy
we all want to lay next toour bady
not in a casket with ourlady
looking for a newcigarette to smoke
But it's ok, i want mygirl to smoke(ing)
in(g)...
oops i mean
« to be »
or do i really ?
Back to the subject
I've felt some much reject
Wait it's not that subect
Fuck it
I aint a subject
Even
tho
i know
That some lab rats wantsme to go
The most important is tonot regret
These ashes are for fags
Looking to hurt you
I wont say no names butfuck you
I'm not lookin for beef
And you shoul feel blestfor that
As a matter of fact
I was vegan
If i enter this table inthis game
of music is like going inyo
ass like if your name wasPame
I'm gonna stop 2 linesshit yo
I skate and smoke and rapand fuck
Everytime i hear a waynesong i say fuck
So yeah u heard that wayneis the BRA
From when i was in mymom's bra
Yo ill steal your line,Smoke so much look like i from korea
Oh by the way yo is a markof respect from korea
And since the beat aintgone
I tell you that im only 21
So theres more on me thanbones
For me to aim for thenumber 1
---------- Post added at 08:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:00 PM ----------
theres a lot of typos too sorry about that i never intended to read that early
Since i'm french most of the work is to rap how it sounds in my head, but i think the lyrics are pretty kewl. So many this dont flow as well as i want them to be, by coming here i want to know if its worth training my rapping skills or not.
http://soundcloud.com/adelxoxo-1/2-january
Here are the lyrics:
2 janvier
life is a cigarette, andwe all try to make it last
yet we let our life dropbehind us
Ashes are nothing but past
and people that arentkind to us
Cauqe we we were born wayto fast
or like they say fuckingcrazy
we all want to lay next toour bady
not in a casket with ourlady
looking for a newcigarette to smoke
But it's ok, i want mygirl to smoke(ing)
in(g)...
oops i mean
« to be »
or do i really ?
Back to the subject
I've felt some much reject
Wait it's not that subect
Fuck it
I aint a subject
Even
tho
i know
That some lab rats wantsme to go
The most important is tonot regret
These ashes are for fags
Looking to hurt you
I wont say no names butfuck you
I'm not lookin for beef
And you shoul feel blestfor that
As a matter of fact
I was vegan
If i enter this table inthis game
of music is like going inyo
ass like if your name wasPame
I'm gonna stop 2 linesshit yo
I skate and smoke and rapand fuck
Everytime i hear a waynesong i say fuck
So yeah u heard that wayneis the BRA
From when i was in mymom's bra
Yo ill steal your line,Smoke so much look like i from korea
Oh by the way yo is a markof respect from korea
And since the beat aintgone
I tell you that im only 21
So theres more on me thanbones
For me to aim for thenumber 1
---------- Post added at 08:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:00 PM ----------
theres a lot of typos too sorry about that i never intended to read that early
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