Tranquil - The Prophecy

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Hello everyone!! I have been absent for the past 4-5 months or even longer, had to sort shit out with my life and what-not. But I'm back now, recorded what will become my EP which is entitled "The Prophecy EP" and this will be the intro track to it. Just releasing this because I haven't released anything in a long time and people on here seemed to enjoy my music when I use to be active here, and showed me alot of love. So I'm gonna start being active again and dropping music, so anyone that wants to collab or anything, hit me up! Enjoy!

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[mrstraightfire]

The instrumental: Didn't blow me away, but it's really good for an intro
Lyrics : Lyrics were nice, I like how you made multi-rhymes (ex: that beretta/deader/better line)
Flow : Flow was not bad, but it needs more variations within the verse

Overall, it' was cool, I just didn't like the vocal quality, but I think the effect you put on the vocals was the desired effect you wanted, so I understand the concept.

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[pgathriller]

your vocals sound really sharp and filtered

first suggestion would be to throw a de-esser on your vocals and/or put an EQ on there and roll off the really high frequencies

2nd would be to try to fatten up your vocals but this might be due to your mic not being that great of quality; however, if you think your mic is decent/quality you might be over compressing/EQing/etc your vocals because they really sound like the "body" of your vocals is missing and the high end is being pushed too hard so work on your vocal mixing/recording

other than that though, you have a dope energy and delivery in your flow. the track is dope, but it's being held back with the recording quality but with a proper recording this shit would be slamming!

[TupacShaquer]

I remember you , you always had a dope flow. I'll need you for a feature
You remind me of a rapper but I can't think of him right now.
IDK but your flow is fucking sick bro , thats what keeps this track so tight.
Those lyrics are a little above average, but that ending hook or bridge or w.e it is really helped this songs ending. Really dope song I fucks with you and I'll deff check your tape out.

Overall, 4/5 good shit

[mykill]

Where you from? I think this is the first time I caught your accent...

Flow seems pretty on point. Mixing is pretty good too. Vocals might not be as clear as possible so you might want to work on that some. Hook is decent, but sometimes I feel like theres too many syllables and it doesnt flow as well. This was hella short. Finish it and repost. I know its an intro, but throw another verse or two on it and keep going. Good energy on this track and a great way to start off your EP.

You down to collab?

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Thank you all for checking this shit out! The first single off the EP will drop within a Month!
[MENTION=74311]mrstraightfire[/MENTION], thanks for the feed man, I'll check the song out now! [MENTION=61287]pgathriller[/MENTION], thanks for the tips! Ill go back to the songs and re-mix them and make the vocals sound better! [MENTION=20888]mykill[/MENTION], Australia man, haha listening to my old songs it sounded like I tried to hide the accent abit, have no idea why I done haha. I'm thinking about dropping another verse on it, I guess time will tell, and yeah man I'm down to collab, hit me up in inbox!

[Laudacity93]

You kinda remind me of K Coke. The instrumental as far as a intro was okay it kinda had a generic feel to it though. Your vocals did seem high frequencies in terms of mixing. But other than that everything was good.

[Yung_Word]

Cool Song, And Dope Flow.
$W▲G.

[MC_Crary]

Yeah I never heard the accent either man. It's funny, I had this beat at one point. I think I was calling it No Respect or something like that lol.

Good for an intro, but that hook needs a little more umph. The verse flows into the hook, no difference in the flow, so it sounds like a run on on sentence.The volume sounds a little low. Lyrics were good, but the flow is a bit too relaxed. I got kinda lost in the steadiness and missed some good lines. Hope that makes sense. Didn't know how else to word it lol. With a little work, this could be a great intro.

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Thank you all for coming and checking it. I'm trying to fix the mixing on my other songs, so hopefully I get it sounded great! Thanks once again!