Inspirational Intro Type Track [Jazzy/Spacey/Tempo Automation]

[pgathriller]

Back yet again with another weird beat:

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It's like slightly jazzy, slightly spacey, with an overall inspirational tone -- the beat continuously builds in the first half and then the tempo starts to gradually grow in the second half; makes for a nice intro track with the whole movie quote intro and then a changing beat to really show off the lyrical abilities of the artist and set a nice tone for a mixtape/album....I guess....I don't even know with this one, it's just odd...there's even a hook randomly attached in the end haha it's a mess but hopefully an imaginative artist can pull this shit together haha; let me know if you think this was a good idea haha


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[mykill]

What's the quote from? Pursuit of Happiness. I've never seen that movie...

I dont think the intro with the quote really meshed well with the beat in the beginning. The beat is pretty good still, reminiscent of a possible Kendrick Lamar style track. Everything seems to be composed pretty well throughout, and there's a nice bit of variety in sounds on the beat that make it sound complete and professional.

Ending tempo change seemed awkward to me...

[pgathriller]

What's the quote from? Pursuit of Happiness. I've never seen that movie...

I dont think the intro with the quote really meshed well with the beat in the beginning. The beat is pretty good still, reminiscent of a possible Kendrick Lamar style track. Everything seems to be composed pretty well throughout, and there's a nice bit of variety in sounds on the beat that make it sound complete and professional.

Ending tempo change seemed awkward to me...

yeah, it's from Pursuit Of Happiness; it's a cool movie but imo it's not as good as people/reviews say

and yeah, I agree about the ending, had no idea how to end it haha, with the building tempo I just had no idea where to go with it haha so I just threw that on there for some random dissipation but yeah, it is a bit awkward, especially when you aren't expecting it