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  • Rembrandt - Wishing Well

    Hey look, a double entendre song title. But anyways, new song. I was up all night, so I decided to write a last verse. Monster coming soon. Youth in Revolt. I'll also be droppin' another song today with one of my favorites in the studio. Shoutout to Francois Dillinger.

    Wishing Well.mp3

    Lyrics:
    And I won't change just so they feel me, man/
    I'm walking with my hood up lookin' for the next Zimmerman/
    They tellin' me I'm too smart to be a rapper/
    They don't hear the difference and think of us all as trappers/
    Legal way to get out of the ways they trapped us/
    And I admit, we need less rappers and more college students/
    I'll set the precedent on how to do this/
    and they actin' like I couldn't be president if I do this/
    Well, fuck them niggas and the way they judgin'/
    Makin' somethin' outta nothin', I'm a Fullmetal Alchemist/
    And I know they doubtin' this/
    They wanna see me fail and even if I did/
    bitch, I would never tell/
    'cause I threw all my money down the wishing well/

    Chorus:
    too lazy to write. it's not that complex anyways, lmao.

    Verse 1 continued:
    Understandably, I'm a problem, so they probably won't understand me/
    I threw away the cards that life handed me/
    Understand me, they tried to underhand me/
    and I'm avoiding those probabilities to the best of my abilities, nigga/

    Verse 2 (A dream sequence, that's why it's more typical rap and the deeper voice indicates it's a nightmare, as to show it's a possibility I would have to continuously make songs like these if I got signed):
    Please do not put me in a lane with these lames/
    Twice my age, but I still outrap them all the same/
    Got these niggas goin' insane, puttin' the pistol to they brain/
    and I'm just sayin', "Bang, bitch, bang."/
    "Go ahead and kill yourself," pardon me for being heartless/
    But you gotta understand, man, I ain't even start this/
    Stop and spark it; take aim at my targets/
    Colorin' out of lines and writin' out of margins/
    I'm so abstract. Writin' like I'm 32, but I'm only half that. (even though I'm 17 now. -__-)/
    And I always kill the halves that I give back/
    and man, let's be real. When I sign my deal/
    these haters'll cry more than my mama will/

    Verse 3:
    I been dreamin' way too long, I'm over it/
    That "I'm so close, I can feel it" you know the shit/
    and your fears start kickin' in, and you hopin' that they don't notice it/
    that's that fuck shit, man, I know you know the scent/
    Yeah, and you're regrettin' all your past decisions/
    thinkin' you knew best when you refused to listen/
    then you thinkin' like what if I don't make it... what if I don't become shit?/
    What if I get locked up on some dumb shit?/
    Right? But what if I do survive and get locked in a 9-5?/
    Either way, I'm institutionalized/
    and one is better than the other, but neither is right for me, so I'm tryna choose another/
    and my mother, yeah, she wanna see that doctorate/
    but I ain't patient, no time for that doctor shit/
    So I might risk it all and lose it/
    Sorry if I do it/
    but with your head in the clouds, it's too easy to lose it/

    Chorus/outro:
    Random nigga shit I said, lmao.



    Goddamn, this was a lot longer on paper. Here I am thinking I was writing a novella and shit, lol.



    Last edited by ATLien666; 06-29-2012, 09:22 AM.


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  • #2
    God damn your best song IMO . Really liked how this came out man . Lyrics were going innnnnnnnnn and your flow was there. Liked how you turned it into two songs. Lol. That second line in the first verse >>>
    My favorite part of the song
    Well, fuck them niggas and the way they judgin'/
    Makin' somethin' outta nothin', I'm a Fullmetal Alchemist/
    And I know they doubtin' this/
    They wanna see me fail and even if I did/
    bitch, I would never tell/

    ^^^
    Lol the flow on that part was pretty dope.

    Overall 4/5 good shit ill peep the tape.
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    • #3
      Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
      God damn your best song IMO . Really liked how this came out man . Lyrics were going innnnnnnnnn and your flow was there. Liked how you turned it into two songs. Lol. That second line in the first verse >>>
      My favorite part of the song
      Well, fuck them niggas and the way they judgin'/
      Makin' somethin' outta nothin', I'm a Fullmetal Alchemist/
      And I know they doubtin' this/
      They wanna see me fail and even if I did/
      bitch, I would never tell/

      ^^^
      Lol the flow on that part was pretty dope.

      Overall 4/5 good shit ill peep the tape.
      Right on! I was definitely feeling the same. I really like this one and that's my favorite part, too. I'm glad i nailed that, lol.

      but I appreciate it!


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      • #4
        almost all day with only one person giving feedback. -___-


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        • #5
          Will get on some feedback when I get back from the movies bro.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by JAYRMe View Post
            Will get on some feedback when I get back from the movies bro.
            ight, right on, my nigga!


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            • #7
              Love the lyrics, its always better to read a song while u hear it makes it seem like its that much more

              4/5
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              • #8
                i love the beat, and the intro narrative, this sounds kinda like kayne or cudi, love the vibe and the flow is very unusual but works well,
                i like it when you start droppin over the melody half way thru the first verse, this is well put toghether and the delivery and emotion are perfect, love this shit!! then when it changes up its sick specially the dark sounding libs 4.5/5


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                • #9
                  you got tho most unorthadox flow, it sounds like you off beat then you bring back, that shits pretty ill tbh. that second verse>>>>>>>>>> flow & lyrcs 5/5 there and then when it switches back is dope too. do you do the transitions of the beat yourself? the lyrics throughout the whole song good

                  What if I get locked up on some dumb shit?/
                  Right? But what if I do survive and get locked in a 9-5?/
                  Either way, I'm institutionalized/

                  ^^^
                  thats some of the realest shit ever spoken lol

                  flow 4/5
                  lyrics 4/5
                  overall 4/5
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                  • #10
                    This sounds like you mix 3 songs in one... but all the verses are good, and about chorus i heard it only 1 time, lol. but overall it is good. Good luck!!

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by yungfamou5 View Post
                      Love the lyrics, its always better to read a song while u hear it makes it seem like its that much more

                      4/5
                      True, 'preciate it!

                      Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                      i love the beat, and the intro narrative, this sounds kinda like kayne or cudi, love the vibe and the flow is very unusual but works well,
                      i like it when you start droppin over the melody half way thru the first verse, this is well put toghether and the delivery and emotion are perfect, love this shit!! then when it changes up its sick specially the dark sounding libs 4.5/5
                      I am very Kanye influenced, ahah. but right on, I'm glad you were feelin' it!

                      Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
                      you got tho most unorthadox flow, it sounds like you off beat then you bring back, that shits pretty ill tbh. that second verse>>>>>>>>>> flow & lyrcs 5/5 there and then when it switches back is dope too. do you do the transitions of the beat yourself? the lyrics throughout the whole song good

                      What if I get locked up on some dumb shit?/
                      Right? But what if I do survive and get locked in a 9-5?/
                      Either way, I'm institutionalized/

                      ^^^
                      thats some of the realest shit ever spoken lol

                      flow 4/5
                      lyrics 4/5
                      overall 4/5
                      right on, I never notice it, lol. and yeah, I did the transitions myself. I had these two beats and I realized I wasn't gonna do the other one, so I just slid it in there on impulse, lol. but yeah, those are them rapper fears, lmao. right on, bro!

                      Originally posted by akkucc View Post
                      This sounds like you mix 3 songs in one... but all the verses are good, and about chorus i heard it only 1 time, lol. but overall it is good. Good luck!!
                      Yeah, I mixed two of 'em. right on and yeah, there really isn't much of a chorus, just some simple shit. glad you liked it!


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                      • #12
                        the beat is ok, but i really liked your voice and your flow! i think you can do pretty dope songs with your style

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