Gibbsy - They Dont Know You

[Gibbsy]

This track is new , it comes from one of my most recent jam sessions, intially it wasn't going to be a full track just a mess around type thing but i liked the hook so decided to spit some bars over the verses i hope you like it, and before anyone comments on how its popish , that was my intention

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[@TygaHQ]

Wow how is this have no replies, you are soooooo good n/h you have a unique style

[Gibbsy]

thanks you man, yer i been gettin slept on a bit recently but its all goood, hopefully people will feed a lil more

[IN10SION]

I like the Beat on this one. Your rappin is good but i liked your voice on some songs of your mixtape more!
but a good song man, just keep doin ur thing !

[ATLien666]

You really remind me of Travie McCoy. You wrote the chorus, right? You could really mold hits, but you needa work on your audio quality, though. Get that fix and you could easily blow up.


Flow - 5/5: You have a perfect flow and your delivery is top-notch. like if you got the quality right, this could be a hit, real shit.

Lyrics - 5/5: I didn't notice any, like, standout lines (it would help if you posted the lyrics), but you stuck to the subject and idk, man, I just really fuck with this song. It's hard to really critique this shit.

Other - That chorus is so fucking perfect. It really reminds me of some 90s blink-182 type shit, like I would hear it as the theme song of some dope ass movie like Max Keeble's Big Move or Big Fat Liar or some Drake and Josh movie. idk, man, it's just dope as fuck.

Overall - 5/5

Better audio quality and this would be perfect, man. fuck.

[Gibbsy]

You really remind me of Travie McCoy. You wrote the chorus, right? You could really mold hits, but you needa work on your audio quality, though. Get that fix and you could easily blow up.


Flow - 5/5: You have a perfect flow and your delivery is top-notch. like if you got the quality right, this could be a hit, real shit.

Lyrics - 5/5: I didn't notice any, like, standout lines (it would help if you posted the lyrics), but you stuck to the subject and idk, man, I just really fuck with this song. It's hard to really critique this shit.

Other - That chorus is so fucking perfect. It really reminds me of some 90s blink-182 type shit, like I would hear it as the theme song of some dope ass movie like Max Keeble's Big Move or Big Fat Liar or some Drake and Josh movie. idk, man, it's just dope as fuck.

Overall - 5/5

Better audio quality and this would be perfect, man. fuck.

thanx man its the mastering not the mic tho just need to perfect my mastering, but thanksyou homie, i did aim for a blink 182 sounding vibe with the hook , as i was writing i was thinkin this sounds blink 182 ish ahha thanx for the feed homie!! and yer i wrote tho whole track man

[MC_Crary]

I felt like your mastering was better on your mix tape tracks. Vocals need some compression and eq, or more. Really good hook man, people leave off the list when it comes to the guys around here who can craft a good hook. Lyrics fit the concept well. Execution was on par. You definitely have your lane down pat. I've always thought you had a radio/pop sound to you. Your music could really take off with continued work dude.

[RIOT]

I like this for the most part. The auto tune, I felt, kinda made this track kinda weak at first, but as soon as your verse kicked in I was pretty much jamming to it. You have an awesome vibe in this song.

[Explicit]

Shit man! Honestly didn't know what to expect. Pretty mainstream song but that's cool cause you executed it perfect. The chorus is pretty catchy but I wasn't digging the auto-tune, to me its really played out. Good flow and lryics though man, if this was in clubs I could get down to it!

[Laudacity93]

Overall i would say a 7/10, the autotune was a negative, but the hook had a mainstream feel to it and didn't seem basic which is a plus, and you kinda remind me of Travie McCoy as well.

[Gibbsy]

Thankyou for the feed yall, and yer i think the autotune was used more as a confidence boost for me as tbh i cant sing and dont claim to be able to , but with the autotune on the out of tune parts seemed alot less pronounced, thanx for the feed yall, ill be droppin a mini mixtape soon aswell, ive been fuckin about with alot of diff styles and av some music coming that is WAYYYYYYYYYY out there lol

[JSmooth]

this joint is catchy as hell bro…chorus is on point i was really feelin that….honestly didnt even pay attention to the lyrics but in this type of song idgaf as long as i can vibe to it…nice track