New Beat Again :: Need Feedback

[IN10SION]

hey guys here is my new beat called 'Good Life'
most of you liked my first beat 'Get What You Wish For' so i hope you like this one too.
some feed back would be cool

Rap Hip Hop Beat Instrumental Good Life - YouTube


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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...neva-seen.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post896914

[Gibbsy]

sick man!! ide love to get a song over this the drums are spot on specially as it plays thru, and its mixed nicely good work man!!!

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Best beat yet bro!

[IN10SION]

Thanks Poyo !

Thanks Gibbsy too, if you want you can have that beat man, i'll send you a download link!

[pgathriller]

aww man, I love those drawn out claps -- I heard that shit in a Big Krit song and I tried to do it but couldn't get the effect to sound right; I like how you pulled it off though man

imo, the composition on this is dope -- but the mix is really holding it back

the brass sounds slightly detuned, or maybe it's those synth stabs or even possibly something else but something sounds a bit detuned just enough to throw the harmony into a bit of rough spot. Also, those rimshot snares or whatever they are (they first show up at 0:26) I'm really not diggin. all the drums sound a bit cluttered -- I mean, there's the claps, plus the rimshot thing, but there's also a constant snare; it's just a bit too much and it takes away from the rhythm of the beat more than helps it imo because there's so much going on, you can't really follow the elements -- you're just kinda hit with a wall of sound so it's a bit fatiguing to listen to

overall, I really dig the composition, but I think your instruments need to be upgraded a bit and if your drums were cleaned up a bit more it would really help blast this thing into orbit!

[IN10SION]

Thanks man! Yeah i wanted it to sound heavy. Thats my 3. Beat i made i have to learn many things, so this critique is very useful !