Darkness-Lil Vince

[wayniac number1]

so heres another beat i did, has a dark vibe to it, and has a lil switch up in there (if u can call it one)









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[ATLien666]

Kinda basic, but I like it, though. I loved the part where the beat, like, slows down. I can see someone killing this, they're gonna have to have a certain unique flow to them because the beat is kinda repetitive. All in all, I would say it's a 3/5.

[pgathriller]

oh god! how many times am I going to have to hear those same god damn "heys" in every beat haha

for real though, those things are soooo cliche and annoying


anyway, beat is really weird and dissonant -- too weird for my taste, post this over on an Odd Future forum and I think they'd be better at giving feedback to a style like this


(for the record, I didn't like it [instruments sound straight out the box (that brass is terrible son) and all the drums sound like you got them from a "Lil Jon Drum Kit" from Mediafire and didn't bother trying to layer them or anything])

[mykill]

hmmmm....

I like it. They "hey" dont bother me as much as pga. Got a hella creepy vibe to it... really tyler the creator-ish style to it...

Definitely stop using those stock sounds. use the ones from the kit and make sure you try a good bit of em out before you stick to one. The snare on the change up doesnt sound organic at all. Good variety though and you might want to take a melody to go with the main horn. Change the snare out for the drum roll too and find something better.

Overall: 3.9/5