hustle keep callin me ft. slang

[yungfamou5]

Hopefully yall like this

Hustle Keep Callin Me ft. Slang
21.%20Hustle%20Keep%20Callin'%20Me%20%5BRemix%5D%20-%20Slang%20ft.%20Famou$%20Bueller.MP3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

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[@Poyo_Kardashian]

chorus is dope as fuck, the phone in the background is a nice touch...very good quality. second verse is the best one but the first verse dope too. keep posting songs here bro

[yungfamou5]

Thank god u like the 2nd verse cuz dat was mine lol

[ATLien666]

I'mma just critique your verse.

Flow - 4/5: You have a really laid back flow, it would be perfect if you upped the delivery. you sounded really bored delivering this. Up the delivery and it would be perfect.

Lyrics - 3.5/5: I liked the, "why would I find my own chick, when i could just take yours." line, but a lot of your lines were cliched punchlines (e.g. "grind like a skateboard" "do it like nike"). with songs like this, I expect more subtle metaphors/similes or extensive wordplay. but that's why I don't really listen to trap rap or things like it, unless it's flocka, lol. Like, have you heard Fat Raps (remix)? Boldy James' verse is one of the best drug verses ever, not because of the metaphors, but because of his sentence structure and rhyme scheme.

Other - I did enjoy the song, though. Nice quality and nice chorus.

Overall (Whole song) - 3.5/5

[yungfamou5]

Lol thanks I understand I really don't like trap rap as much more of a swag rapper lol this was my friends idea which is why he does the hook

[MC_Crary]

Haven't heard you in awhile, but this track is nice. Hood feel to it. Hook reminds me of some 90's Zro or something like that. Old-school southern vibe, that's my favorite thing about this one. The sing songy flow from Slang was good at the beginning too. Your verse was pretty simple though. I would've like to hear you go harder on the track. An energy filled delivery would've been good on something like this. It would've made your verse stand out more. Keep the tracks coming though man, seems like your serious about your hustle.

[yungfamou5]

Thanks for the feedback I mite have to re record my verse lol

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I just wanna say thanks to all 2000 plays in 1 day I received for this song