New shit

[BILI]

I`m comin wit this new shit,I just can`t resist not to spit
Man theres somethin you`ll never hear,and its that i quit
And don`t try to spit the shit that I spit cause your heart?ll stop
You`ll just shut down,and you`ll need to fuckin restart on spot
Sometimes I go 2 crazy wit my rhymes,and sometimes not
I just go and spit radomly whatever comes to my mind
If you don`t think this shit`s hot,man you`r fuckin blind
I`m so fuckin good at this,thers none that I couldn`t diss

[ajbirch]

Re: New shit

not bad

[BILI]

Re: New shit

not bad

thx

[trillphill]

Re: New shit

Double negative means you can resist to spit.
Overuse of spit and shit.
Transition between bars isn't that good and your choice of words/grammar is awkward at times.

[BILI]

Re: New shit

Double negative means you can resist to spit.
Overuse of spit and shit.
Transition between bars isn't that good and your choice of words/grammar is awkward at times.

thx for the feed,and for the grammar,well English is not my main language

[trillphill]

Re: New shit

No problem.

[morphineroberts]

Re: New shit

I like that shit, pimp.

Spit consecutive- as positive as pairs of double negative
I'm something like Predator- the Alien's competitor.
My hit points is infinite- niggas should level up
because my hardknock school games accredited
My king demeanor is on some next level Elvis shit
The octane i spit is the same i light celtic with.
I knew i was the shit way before you was smellin
You have just entered the room of the elephant
Almighty

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: New shit

Haha Im Dat New Shit..And You pissed
Gottem Askin How I Do This?
They Amazed At How Young N Ruthless
I Am..Damn
Its Cuz They Layin Up And I Slam
Hahaha Dizzy Go Spaghetti..Meatball Ham
They Just Vegitarian Platters
Me Im Flattered
ya Girl Got me Goin Up like A ladder
And i Splatter And She Just Lather..It Up
All On Her Face...Yep Poker Face