J-Smooth- Ghoulish (FREESTYLE)

[JSmooth]

I was recording last night and decided to just go off the dome one time….happy 4th of July muthafuckas


Ghoulish- http://www.sharebeast.com/fgdqjg5t6isc


Feed:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post900496
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post900490

[Gibbsy]

feelin' the beat, love the old school sounding shitt !!!, flow is sick man, quality a lil off but not really badly, i like how it sounds like an interlude to some crazy epic track, if that wasnt the intention i could deffo see it working for that!!
lyrically its tight for real!! 4.5/5 nice freestyle man, allthough ide say some if not all of this was written :L

the "and its fuck you bitch if you a virgin" bar is killer ahha

[KidComet]

Really good esp for a freestyle, this freestyle is better than alot of shit otha niggas put in tha studio.
Sound pro as always man.

[JSmooth]

feelin' the beat, love the old school sounding shitt !!!, flow is sick man, quality a lil off but not really badly, i like how it sounds like an interlude to some crazy epic track, if that wasnt the intention i could deffo see it working for that!!
lyrically its tight for real!! 4.5/5 nice freestyle man, allthough ide say some if not all of this was written :L

the "and its fuck you bitch if you a virgin" bar is killer ahha

preciate the feed bro. im using my mic at home which is why it sounds a little off and i just did this for fun it probably wont be used for anything

[JSmooth]

gotta bump it one time

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Already told you I fuck wit this one on twitter, nothing amazing but still good don't really fuck with the beat though

[ATLien666]

yeah, this beat is still eh. I like this version better than wayne's, though.

Lyrics - 4/5: "these niggas want problems, I'll show 'em the definition." started off grimy as fuck. "All my niggas first class, but if you need a coach, let me know." killer lines, but then you had shit like, "I need head like a hat." and then I was like, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Flow - 4/5: Your flow was on point, but idk why, but I didn't like your delivery in this. I can't really explain it, but it just seemed kinda forced and your voice just sounds weird to me. sounds like you have a cold and your nose is stuffed or something, but whatever.

Other - Still A LOT better than some shit people post here and if this was truly a freestyle, like off the dome type shit, then damn.

Overall - 4/5

[RoadToC4Fan]

Damn where did you find the instrumental for this?

[JSmooth]

yeah, this beat is still eh. I like this version better than wayne's, though.

Lyrics - 4/5: "these niggas want problems, I'll show 'em the definition." started off grimy as fuck. "All my niggas first class, but if you need a coach, let me know." killer lines, but then you had shit like, "I need head like a hat." and then I was like, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Flow - 4/5: Your flow was on point, but idk why, but I didn't like your delivery in this. I can't really explain it, but it just seemed kinda forced and your voice just sounds weird to me. sounds like you have a cold and your nose is stuffed or something, but whatever.

Other - Still A LOT better than some shit people post here and if this was truly a freestyle, like off the dome type shit, then damn.

Overall - 4/5

yea some of those lines ur like ehhh r because i needed something to keep going without messing up the flow lol and if the flow seemed forced at time that was probably where i was struggling to keep the freestyle going…but thanks for the feed bro i appreciate that


RoadtoC4fan- my homie sent it to me so im not sure prolly just youtube

[mykill]

You never disappoint when it comes to good lines and energy. Only problem I had with this is there was no "wow" factor for me. Nothing seemed to jump out and give me that "ooooooo weeeeee" moment. That's just me though. The work there is still consistent and still A+ quality. Good job dude.

Overall: 3.5/5