Sweet 16 - Lil Trev (HKC)

[DatWeezy]

l sumething I did for my sweet 16 series... Lyrics pretty basic, but im gettin my point across.. let me know what yall feel!



Link --- Sweet 16 -- Lil Trev ---- http://limelinx.com/b81vn


Follow on twitter! -- [MENTION=200]Trev[/MENTION]_Da_DJ --@HardKnockClique






Feed 1 - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post901273

Feed 2 - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post901270

[KidComet]

Good simple song, wasnt anything too big, but it wasnt suppose to be.
Lyrics were simple, I liked that one "yall are super fake, check ya make up"

Flow wise, try to get all your words to sound similar, it will make ur flow sound dope

[DatWeezy]

thanks for the feed.

Yea the song is supposed to be simple.

Flow wise-- Yea, like i said this one supposed to be real "loose"... I wasn't really to worried about the flow bein right on point haha.. But thanks again man..

[mykill]

Flow's on point. Lyrics are basic like you said, but still good for the 16. GREAT MIXING. Trev, you should do a solo mixtape. That shit would be killur.

Overall: 4/5

[DatWeezy]

Flow's on point. Lyrics are basic like you said, but still good for the 16. GREAT MIXING. Trev, you should do a solo mixtape. That shit would be killur.

Overall: 4/5

Thanks for the feed man! I've been really thinking about doing a Solo tape to be honest. I may just start one and work on it on the side!

[DatWeezy]

anyone else with some feed? Be greatly appreciated.. Can't improve without yalls input

[Late122]

Flow sounds on point, just pretty much pauses. The fast flow in the end part>>>>>> But I think u should now focus on the delivery, it starts to sound a bit monotone after a while.

[DatWeezy]

Flow sounds on point, just pretty much pauses. The fast flow in the end part>>>>>> But I think u should now focus on the delivery, it starts to sound a bit monotone after a while.

yea lol i know about the mono tone.. Usually i get my voice to sound good and different but this was 3:45 am... haha. couldn't help it.. But thanks for the feed man!

[Cli-City]

Beat on this one sounds T- Minus"ish"

You lil niggas getting dope as fuck......Love this track....nothing to WOW!...but because I don't really peep your shit It was dope......Imma listen some more.......focus on your lyrics I see potential there a lot...that MAKE UP line is dope....too short though..keep going..
3/5

[DatWeezy]

thanks for the feed man.

To anyone saying these are to short -- It's supposed to be... 1 verse.. #sweet16 is the series im doing.. 16 bars/1verse ... Releasing one about every week, just as more practice and to get more feed.

[TupacShaquer]

Lol, damn man you've really grown from that Eminem when im gone to this.

Your flow is really on point , I'm only going through it once and don't hear any slip ups. And yeah like Mykill said , I want to hear a solo tape because imo, your the best in hardknock . Really dope track man, might want to go re record it and get a better delivery like you said it was 3 am so maybe thats why it was monotone a bit at times.

Overall : 3/5 , wanna hear more from you dope flow.

[DatWeezy]

Lol, damn man you've really grown from that Eminem when im gone to this.

Your flow is really on point , I'm only going through it once and don't hear any slip ups. And yeah like Mykill said , I want to hear a solo tape because imo, your the best in hardknock . Really dope track man, might want to go re record it and get a better delivery like you said it was 3 am so maybe thats why it was monotone a bit at times.

Really appreciate the feed and what u said my man. I am really thinkin bout doing this solo tape shit just to see what i can do! I might re record this track and make a hook and another verse and throw it on a tape. I think i could do better than this so thats what imma do haha/

Overall : 3/5 , wanna hear more from you dope flow.

Really appreciate the feed and what u said my man. I am really thinkin bout doing this solo tape shit just to see what i can do! I might re record this track and make a hook and another verse and throw it on a tape. I think i could do better than this so thats what imma do haha --- And you def will hear plenty more haha