IN10SIVE - Another Banger

[IN10SION]

hey guys, i worked on this beat before my pc crashed.. i have to wait till a friend has the time to repair my pc.
So i dont know how long i have to wait till i can continue workin on my beats.

this beat i think is finished, maybe some details are missin.. but cuz i dont know when i could finish this beat i wanted to upload the version i have so far.

Tell me what you think about it.

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...dillinger.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-purpen-2.html

[mykill]

pretty simple beat, but still pretty good. needs way more variety though. all the sounds in it are pretty legit. maybe slightly more bass in the kick. some change ups would be nice too.

Overall: 3.9/5

[pgathriller]

needs a bassline badly to really glue everything together -- that's really the only thing this is missing from being a dope space jam anthem; add in some deep ass 808 rumbles and this thing will set off into outer space!

[IN10SION]

Thank you guys!

Yea i like the drums but i feel like somethings wrong with the synths.. But youre right pga maybe a bassline would help..
i will work a bit before uploading it to my soundclick

[Tha Professor]

Another banger? i dont think so breh. All is pretty basic, and for me enjoyable until 1:21 and on, nice drum rhythms but nothing more . how long have u been making beats for?
anyways ima have to give this 1.5/5

Keep trying tho!

[IN10SION]

no problem man! as i said my pc crashed.. and my pc crashed while i was in the middle of making this beat.. wanted to get some feedback for this one so i can continue with it when my pc is repaired.

been doin this whole beatmaking thing for about half a year now.. this is my weakest beat so far tho
check out my others here:

http://www.soundclick.com/in10sivebeats

[Tha Professor]

Ah, sorry man, didn't actually read what u wrote, just played the beat. Ya i'll check our shit out in due time

[MarvySte]

Exactly what mykill said needs a bigger bass and some more tones n dat in there but still not bad bro

[IN10SION]

Thanks man!