so sick remix snippet

[danielnfl36]

my verse verse recorded ever and my first verse on my new mic please lemme know what you think




should i finish this off? or what do you guys think?

feedback:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905645
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905638

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

I like this from what i heard sofar, only problem is that you need enunciate the last words of your bars more. like single,mingle etc cause you voice gets lower and it hard to unsdterstand what your saying.



btw this might get locked cause Your supposed to leave feedback on two songs before you post a song or even a snippet.

[danielnfl36]

I like this from what i heard sofar, only problem is that you need enunciate the last words of your bars more. like single,mingle etc cause you voice gets lower and it hard to unsdterstand what your saying.



btw this might get locked cause Your supposed to leave feedback on two songs before you post a song or even a snippet.

i left feedback no worries now good lookin out tho
was gonna thank but i cant right now ill +rep tho

[danielnfl36]

i left feedback no worries now good lookin out tho
was gonna thank but i cant right now ill +rep tho

[mykill]

You sound scared of the mic. Get better mic presence. You sound very monotone, which is something that plagues people when they first start rapping. No biggie.

Always remember to post your feedback like so:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905645
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905638

Or else I'll lock your thread up or trash it in a heart beat.

Welcome to Tha Stu. Now post the full song already.

[danielnfl36]

You sound scared of the mic. Get better mic presence. You sound very monotone, which is something that plagues people when they first start rapping. No biggie.

Always remember to post your feedback like so:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905645
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post905638

Or else I'll lock your thread up or trash it in a heart beat.

Welcome to Tha Stu. Now post the full song already.

like i said it was my first time any ideas for practice ? also i did post feedback infact one of them was on one of the links you sent

[mykill]

ideas for practice?
record your verse, listen to it, figure out how to make it better, re-record it. also helps to go over your verse a few times before you spit. even better when you memorize it and just spit it like its natural

as far as feedback goes, I know its your first time, so I'm just not locking it. But next time, make sure to include the links where you posted feedback.

[danielnfl36]

ideas for practice?
record your verse, listen to it, figure out how to make it better, re-record it. also helps to go over your verse a few times before you spit. even better when you memorize it and just spit it like its natural

as far as feedback goes, I know its your first time, so I'm just not locking it. But next time, make sure to include the links where you posted feedback.

oh thank you man for lettin me know to post it good lookin out as for the practice ill do that too