Cas - Desperado freestyle

[__cas__]

Me goin over Mac's Desperado beat from Macadelic.


Desperado by CasBenJayMelf on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free



Feed 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post906588

Feed 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post906584

[l2yan]

awesome man! great sound quality as well. how did u record it?

[ATLien666]

Flow: 4/5 - Almost flawless, but some lines seemed shorter than they should've been. Mainly around the beginning, but after that, it was back on track and perfect. The flow switch you did on the second verse was niiiiiice.

Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Not that many quality lines, imo. A lot were cliched punchlines just reworded, but I did like the "music's magic man, they think I'mma genie. but i'm the young rap demon, live from the ouija." You seem to be better at coming up with quality lines than great punchlines, yk?

Other - Curious to hear more of your music.

Overall - 4/5

[pgathriller]

vocals are recorded really hot, sound like they're peaking or right on the verge of distortion -- watch your mic input levels when you record and your vocals will come in a lot smoother and less sharp

flow is nice man, you rock the best dopely man, just clean up your recordings and this shit will blast off!

[__cas__]

awesome man! great sound quality as well. how did u record it?

Thanks bro! Recorded this with a Rode NT2A mic running through an Mbox 3 Pro into Fl Studio.

Flow: 4/5 - Almost flawless, but some lines seemed shorter than they should've been. Mainly around the beginning, but after that, it was back on track and perfect. The flow switch you did on the second verse was niiiiiice.

Lyrics: 3.5/5 - Not that many quality lines, imo. A lot were cliched punchlines just reworded, but I did like the "music's magic man, they think I'mma genie. but i'm the young rap demon, live from the ouija." You seem to be better at coming up with quality lines than great punchlines, yk?

Other - Curious to hear more of your music.

Overall - 4/5

Appreciate the legit review man. But yeah, I personally enjoy flow over straight up lyrics (big Wayne fan) but I could work some better lyrics in with it.

vocals are recorded really hot, sound like they're peaking or right on the verge of distortion -- watch your mic input levels when you record and your vocals will come in a lot smoother and less sharp

flow is nice man, you rock the best dopely man, just clean up your recordings and this shit will blast off!

Thanks man! Appreciate it! I know what you mean about the vocals. I obviously do all this shit myself and I've realized that mixing is wayyyy harder than rapping. Been working at it over the past year though and it's starting to come together, but yeah thanks for the advice!

[TupacShaquer]

Mixing/Mastering sounds pretty pro on your vocals man. Perfect tbh .
Flow was fire , always liked it and your stepping your lyrics up. Some dope lines here and also some simple lines but it sounds good overall and I really liked it. You always seem to do freestyles tho , I want to hear some original stuff from you. Do some hooks man I feel like they would sound really catchy since you mix and master well.

[__cas__]

Mixing/Mastering sounds pretty pro on your vocals man. Perfect tbh .
Flow was fire , always liked it and your stepping your lyrics up. Some dope lines here and also some simple lines but it sounds good overall and I really liked it. You always seem to do freestyles tho , I want to hear some original stuff from you. Do some hooks man I feel like they would sound really catchy since you mix and master well.

Thanks man! Yeah, I've only posted some freestyles here, but I've done a couple songs with hooks. I didn't put a hook on this one because there's no hook on the original. I'll post an original song with a hook a little later, but thanks again!