Cli-City - ?????

[Cli-City]

I think I used some of these lyrics before...but I figured I would let you hear what I had before. Still trying to get into the studio to record some features...

"Life for us is just weed and brew, hope out that motherfucker like peek a boo"

1. http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-purp-man.html
2. http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...s-drippin.html

[KidComet]

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[RoadToC4Fan]

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Thanks for the bump KidComet.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Nice comeback song, I love the vibe of this joint sounds like it could be a dope outro to your mixtape? lyrically strong as always bruh bruh same with flow. only criticism really is that it kinda drags on with there being no chorus kinda got bored a lil more than halfway through. i feel like any song w/o a chours shouldnt be much longer than 3 min unless you on some next level crazy punchline shit on some banging ass beat imo


Lol @ "I aint done shitting on niggas i can still wipe"

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

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thanks for the bump.

Thanks for the bump KidComet.

^ this

only criticism really is that it kinda drags on with there being no chorus kinda got bored a lil more than halfway through. i feel like any song w/o a chours shouldnt be much longer than 3 min unless you on some next level crazy punchline shit on some banging ass beat imo

^
this tbh.
i got bored less than halfway through this and unplugged my computer.

[ATLien666]

i got bored less than halfway through this and unplugged my computer.

yo. ahahahahahaha.


but anyways, I'll give feedback in a few. I just had to post because that shit was hilarious.


Flow - 3.5/5: You have a really nice flow, but a very boring delivery. it's just soooooo boring, which is weird. normally it doesn't bother me, but this time it definitely hindered the song. It was hard for me to even focus on this. You flowed very smooth over this, though.

Lyrics - 3.9/5: "How you niggas ballin' when you bounce like a bad check?" Nice lines are all through this song. "I (w)rap like Christmas, I spit like a cobra (? I think that's what you said, lol) - I guess the way I spit raps are a gift and a curse" I fucks with it. But your delivery really fucks this up, too. If anything, it fucked your lyrics more than your flow.

Other - Song was way too long. Should've cut that shit after you were finished rapping.

Overall - 3.5/5

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

yo. ahahahahahaha.


but anyways, I'll give feedback in a few. I just had to post because that shit was hilarious.

i see u unplugged your computer as well.
because you had to wait for it to start back up again to edit this post and leave feedback

[MC_Crary]

My nigga. Ready for more material. I wanna see this niggas notebook. Bet you been gettin inspiration out the ass on the Islands homie.

[Cli-City]

My nigga. Ready for more material. I wanna see this niggas notebook. Bet you been gettin inspiration out the ass on the Islands homie.

I can't wait to hold onto my mic....am I the last step in Mac moretti being finished...?

[MC_Crary]

I can't wait to hold onto my mic....am I the last step in Mac moretti being finished...?

Nah, Ive been super busy lately. Im about 75% finished. Its coming, probably drop another single next week.

[mykill]

Must have not hit post when i commented on this back in the day...

Lyrically dope as fuck. Dont know where you might have used some of these lines before. Beat is great too.

Overall: 4.4/5, finish the mastering on this. Maybe even lease the beat so you dont get that noise from the drops. This track is solid man.