Checkmate The Gr8 - #PHUCKDOPE

[Checkmatemuzick]

**NEW MUSIC**




Here's a snippet of a track I experiemented wit...new sound same Checkmate formula DopeBeat + DopeLyrics = #PhucknDope If u not a fan or fuckn wit my music #stopsleepin Enjoy

http://hu.lk/zcw43en1ke80



CHECK-tember 3rd = ApeShit2

Feedback #1 = http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...od-lights.html
Feedback #2 = http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...rembrandt.html

[ATLien666]

Damn, professional quality sound. I likes.

Flow - 4.5/5: I can definitely tell you're from chicago, but you also have that kinda southern flow on this. I like it. It's kinda hasty, but it fits the beat well.

Lyrics - 5/5: "and real MCs, who struggle for they one chance, might lose it to a whack rapper with a business plan." You only flowed for 1 minute, but you spit some real shit. We need more of this around the studio. Not a lot of corny punchlines, but some real lyrical shit. I fucks with.

Other - should've flowed for longer. I'mma have to peep your mixtape.

Overall - 4.5/5

[Checkmatemuzick]

Thanks bruh I appreciate the feedback! I'm 4rm Miami I'm just stayin in the Chi...but I appreciate u fuckn wit the joint Tell these other niggas #stopsleepin I make real shit for real niggas alike

[KidComet]

Damn you got a good voice,
Im lovin the beat, what is it??? I want it haha


I think the intro was too long, but the scarcthes were dope,

Your the rode beat, its a chill song, if you promote your shit more, you can blow up, like if you were made a chill ass video for this song, you will get your name out.

[T-DOLO]

listening....ok...i like the production on this joint...the beat has that old skool feel..i like it...especially has some good qoutes in it....the verse was
nt bad...nice way of keeping to the topic...nice message..im feeling it...need this back in hip hop...would like it more if you was ripping it more seriously but it was a nice feel...overall
3.8/5

[mykill]

30+ secs in and nothing... wtf...

Hmmm.... LYRICALLY this was hot. I like the grimey, freestyle sound to it as well. You should make it a real track and get some better quality files of those sound bites.

Overall: 3.5/5 (too short... )

[Checkmatemuzick]

Thanks I appreciate the feedback homie the video coming soon tho we got a dope concept just fuck wit me

---------- Post added at 11:36 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:33 AM ----------

listening....ok...i like the production on this joint...the beat has that old skool feel..i like it...especially has some good qoutes in it....the verse was
nt bad...nice way of keeping to the topic...nice message..im feeling it...need this back in hip hop...would like it more if you was ripping it more seriously but it was a nice feel...overall
3.8/5

thanks i appreciate u checkn out the song dis is just the snippet the full version gon be on the mixtape just fuck wit me

---------- Post added at 11:43 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:36 AM ----------

30+ secs in and nothing... wtf...

Hmmm.... LYRICALLY this was hot. I like the grimey, freestyle sound to it as well. You should make it a real track and get some better quality files of those sound bites.

Overall: 3.5/5 (too short... )

thanks i appreciate the feedback lol its just a snippet its another verse on the whole song

[Sentus]

Beat was amazing ahhh, if you make songs for backpackers then it definitely worked

I thought you had a good flow and delivery but as other people were praising you for your quality I thought it was kinda poor, either that or you rapped this with an extremely sore throat because it sounds scratchy as hell. Your lyrics were alright, better than most people on here but obviously could use some improving.

[pgathriller]

This is nice -- really diggin the vocal doubles; adds a dope wideness accent to the vocals that a lot of people on here don't do but it really adds to the emotion and presence of the flow

delivery is on point too man; nice and tight and just rocked that beat really well man -- shit was dope