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  • Rembrandt - We Need To Talk About Kevin

    Oh shit, serious topic and shit. and cookie to the first person to name what movie I sampled at the end. Oh yeah, idk if anybody noticed, but every song on my mixtape will be named after movies or quotes from movies. songs that aren't named after movies (Wishing Well) will be soon be named to movies, lol. Youth in Revolt. Monster coming soon.



    Lyrics:
    Kevin from a broken home, his dad beats his mom/
    Every night, he go to sleep and dream that they get along/
    He wish that he could kill him, but he knows that isn't right/
    So he thinkin' in his head that he gon' give it one more night/
    But if he fucks up, it's over/
    They ain't even gonna fight/
    But for now, he beats his brother only 'cause they look alike/
    He has nobody to talk to, nobody to walk to/
    He tried to talk to God, but the call didn't go through/
    School ain't much better/
    He ain't tryna go through this forever/
    Misery love company, this right here go hand-in-hand/
    and he will never understand why he gets no love/
    he just tries to say what's up, but instead he gets a shove/
    he done got his ass beat just for tryna speak/
    the teachers seen it all, but their job is just to teach/
    and they never told a soul about all the things they seen/
    and they never asked Kevin what this all really means/

    Chorus:
    This is my last chance (repeat 3x)/
    I'm ready to shoot (repeat 2 or 3x *shrugs shoulders*)/
    *some cool shit producers do, idk*

    Verse 2:
    His dad beats his mom, right before school/
    Right then he snapped, no time to act cool/
    Gun up in his dad's face, who'd thought it'd come to this/
    Yellin' out, "Come on, say somethin', bitch!"/
    Mama trippin', he ain't listenin'/
    Now he on a mission/
    One shot, two shots - now the whole house is shakin'/
    Breathing hard, breathing hard, he just tryna pace it/
    He ran his dreams away, now his demons are chasin'/
    and he love it, love it/
    He wouldn't trade this feeling for nothing/
    Runnin' in the school shootin' everybody too cool/
    to help him out of his locker or help him out of a trash can/
    and shootin' all of the teachers that saw it and never asked shit/
    not cool enough for the school paper, now he all over TV/
    not cool enough for a plaque on the wall, now he just started a legacy/
    for the first time, he's happy now/
    with that pistol all up in his mouth/
    back to the wall, back to the wall/
    I guess this song just tells it all.../

    Chorus


    niggas are lucky I'm humble, ahahaha.
    Last edited by ATLien666; 07-13-2012, 04:51 AM.


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  • #2
    Damn this is a good song and the beat is dope too, really fits to the subject, especially the chorus. Man lyrics are A+ imo, good storytelling and I didn't get bored trying to hang up with them like I usually do with storytelling songs. There were couple times when the flow sounded a bit forced like in the middle of the first verse but overall flow was good and not boring. Delivery could also be better, try to spice up the adlibs cuz they started to sound like depressing. Gotta say that the flow and delivery have really improved from the last song I heard from you!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Late122 View Post
      Damn this is a good song and the beat is dope too, really fits to the subject, especially the chorus. Man lyrics are A+ imo, good storytelling and I didn't get bored trying to hang up with them like I usually do with storytelling songs. There were couple times when the flow sounded a bit forced like in the middle of the first verse but overall flow was good and not boring. Delivery could also be better, try to spice up the adlibs cuz they started to sound like depressing. Gotta say that the flow and delivery have really improved from the last song I heard from you!
      Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed and can see the improvement. Yeah, I might change some of the adlibs before I put it on the mixtape, but once again, thanks!


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      • #4
        really like this one, you get better and better with every song bro!
        i like how you switch up your flow in the verses, goin from normal tempo to fast flow and back.. good beat and great storytelling too!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by IN10SION View Post
          really like this one, you get better and better with every song bro!
          i like how you switch up your flow in the verses, goin from normal tempo to fast flow and back.. good beat and great storytelling too!
          Thanks! and I liked my flow switch in the second verse, sounds cool every time, ahahha. but I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm writing to your instrumental now.


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          • #6
            lyrics were dope AF , really dope and kept me going on and on. Again I think there was on point in your flow where you fell off but you got back to it. Also try switch the fflow on different verses.
            Other than that A+ imo
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            • #7
              Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
              lyrics were dope AF , really dope and kept me going on and on. Again I think there was on point in your flow where you fell off but you got back to it. Also try switch the fflow on different verses.
              Other than that A+ imo
              Dope shit, right on. I'mma try to perfect the flow soon enough.


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              • #8
                Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
                Thanks! and I liked my flow switch in the second verse, sounds cool every time, ahahha. but I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm writing to your instrumental now.
                Yea hope its finished soon really lookin forward to this !

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by IN10SION View Post
                  Yea hope its finished soon really lookin forward to this !
                  I got you, I'mma try to finish it up real soon!


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                  • #10
                    let me bump this real quick.


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                    • #11
                      You gotta be in a real studio lol. Sick song dude. Are you making these beats?

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                      • #12
                        you keep imoroving dawg. lyrics was flawless you told the story effortlessly, i didnt notice any slipup that the others did in the flow. youth in revolt gonna be a ill . you got a release date?
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