Danielnfl36's first freestyle - stunt hard freestlye

[danielnfl36]

first freestyle guys lemme know how i did and i know its not perfect still tryin to work on mic presence too

feedback

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...e-jetsons.html


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-studio-2.html

[ATLien666]

Flow - 2/5: Was really, really, really bad. At times you were on beat, but you have no flow/rhythm/delivery at all. It seems like you were just reading off the paper and stuff.

Lyrics - 2/5: Really basic stuff. But this was your first freestyle, so you'll probably/hopefully get better over time.

Other - Keep writing and posting songs here.

Overall - 2/5


Wait, now I'm confused. I was listening to your so sick remix snippet and that sounded a WHOLE lot better. So was this really a freestyle or what?

[danielnfl36]

Flow - 2/5: Was really, really, really bad. At times you were on beat, but you have no flow/rhythm/delivery at all. It seems like you were just reading off the paper and stuff.

Lyrics - 2/5: Really basic stuff. But this was your first freestyle, so you'll probably/hopefully get better over time.

Other - Keep writing and posting songs here.

Overall - 2/5


Wait, now I'm confused. I was listening to your so sick remix snippet and that sounded a WHOLE lot better. So was this really a freestyle or what?

this was a freestyle i record using audacity and i play the insturmental in it windows media player im new to recording music i dont even know good mic/sound level settings i totally need help and thanks for being honest if you could pm me tips/info id be thankful