Lyrik Ciroc & Sierra (Feat. Poyo ) (NOT MIXED BY PURPEN :( )

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

This is one of the first verses I ever did, My man Lyrik just decided to release this shit. i mixed this myself since me and purpen didnt really know each other back then and i think it shows lol smh.... I think Lyrik killed this shit.

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[ATLien666]

this instrumental is dope as fuck.

The chorus is really hard to hear, though. It's kinda cool like that.

Lyrik -

Flow: 3/5 - He has a nice flow, but I could tell he put too many words in some bars. he handled it better than me, though and the worst thing is that he sounds bored AS FUCK. He sounds insanely bored.

Lyrics: 3.5/5 - He had some nice lines, but I still can't fuck with his verse just because his delivery is horrible and he just sounds too bored.

Overall - 3/5

Poyo

Flow - 2.5/5: Listen to your new songs and listen to this, lol. The improvement is insane. Your flow isn't absolutely terrible hear, but towards the end of the verse it was really, really bad. If ya'll still have this beat, ya'll should do another song over it, I know you'll be able to flow crazy on it.

Lyrics - 3/5: Just really average. Not a lot of quotables from you this time, but once again, you really improved in this area.

Overall - 3/5

Song overall - 3/5

[RIOT]

Sick beat, but needs a little work on the flow at some points. Keep up at it and practice more. Repetition leads to perfecting something.