Cas - MaryJane ( original w. hook)

[__cas__]

Whats goin on everybody, this is a track I did a while back that I put a hook on. Let me know what you think.


MaryJane by CasBenJayMelf on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free




Review1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post906588

Review2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post906584

[MC_Crary]

Damn, how did everyone miss this? This is a nice switch up. Have you posted here before? Possibly have heard you before but I don't remember. Pretty solid song dude.Lois Lane line is a little off but that might be the only slip up I noticed. Good listen man, keep posting.

[ATLien666]

ah yeah, I listened to this but I forgot to leave feedback.

I really fucks with this track, you one nice flow switch up early in the song which I thought was dope. The only one thing I didn't really like was your mic presence. You have a good delivery, but through the entire song, it just felt like you wasn't really feeling yourself, yk? I wanna hear more from you, you seem like you could do a whole range of songs because I don't really fuck with any stoner rap besides Spitta and Domo.

[__cas__]

Damn, how did everyone miss this? This is a nice switch up. Have you posted here before? Possibly have heard you before but I don't remember. Pretty solid song dude.Lois Lane line is a little off but that might be the only slip up I noticed. Good listen man, keep posting.

Haha yeah I was gonna bump it up bc I didn't know if anyone saw it. Thanks though man.

ah yeah, I listened to this but I forgot to leave feedback.

I really fucks with this track, you one nice flow switch up early in the song which I thought was dope. The only one thing I didn't really like was your mic presence. You have a good delivery, but through the entire song, it just felt like you wasn't really feeling yourself, yk? I wanna hear more from you, you seem like you could do a whole range of songs because I don't really fuck with any stoner rap besides Spitta and Domo.

Thanks man! And yeah I do a lot of different songs. I haven't been rapping that long and I want to try a whole bunch of different types of rap so I can see where I excel at ya know? I kinda see what you're saying about me feelin myself on the track. I recorded this a couple months ago and I was still messing around with my delivery etc. Thanks for the comment though!

[THA GR8 M8]

This is pretty cool dude.... The flow was pretty solid and dope. Lyrics were cool too... "Like bee's on honey, paper on me" love that line. I see this track is unmastered, but you should definitely master it. It sounds like you would have some decent quality if you actually mastered it. First track from you I've heard, and I was NOT disappointed. 4/5. Keep it up brotha.

[__cas__]

This is pretty cool dude.... The flow was pretty solid and dope. Lyrics were cool too... "Like bee's on honey, paper on me" love that line. I see this track is unmastered, but you should definitely master it. It sounds like you would have some decent quality if you actually mastered it. First track from you I've heard, and I was disappointed. 4/5. Keep it up brotha.

I'm hoping you meant "not disappointed" haha but thanks man!

[THA GR8 M8]

I'm hoping you meant "not disappointed" haha but thanks man!

Yeah hahahahahaha, my b. It was dope man.

[TupacShaquer]

Again sounding pro and shit. Flow was really tight , lyrics was pretty dope and caught some dope bars. No complains at all.
But then when the hook came in Sounded really perfect and perfectly mixed. That second verse was deff my favorite verse and I also noticed you got this beat from sinima I think which I got a lot of tracks written too.

[__cas__]

Again sounding pro and shit. Flow was really tight , lyrics was pretty dope and caught some dope bars. No complains at all.
But then when the hook came in Sounded really perfect and perfectly mixed. That second verse was deff my favorite verse and I also noticed you got this beat from sinima I think which I got a lot of tracks written too.

Appreciated my dude. And yeah Sinima makes dope tracks.

[My Hubbie]

maaaaaan... too dope! i can relly listen to it and enjoy it .. props ! keep going man

[Sentus]

Damn dude, this was really good and actually surprised me Literally everything was good, chorus was catchy as fuck and awesome. All I gotta say is never be satisfied, keep working on getting better with time. I would collab with you.

[KidComet]

Gotta nice flow on this, I like how your voice sounds kinda sketchy, it fits the beat,

I liked that paper on me like a mummy line,


Hook is good, but not catchy, but its still cool

give it a good 7/10