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UPDATED WITH THE NEW VERSION
Rembrandt ft. Howie J and Sir Tank.
Excuse the struggle in the last two bars, lmao.
Rembrandt ft. Howie J and Sir Tank.
Excuse the struggle in the last two bars, lmao.
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right on! I'm kinda iffy on it, but I'm glad you like it.Originally posted by RoadToC4Fan View PostComment
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hook is straigh fire not gonna lie...flow was off on verses
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I know what you mean, it's probably the partying theme that you're iffy about. But it's still really good.Originally posted by ATLien666 View PostComment
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damn, bruh. I ain't really notice. I just thought it was kinda awkward sounding. thanks, though.Originally posted by ThaMothafuckinCarter View Post
Yeah, it's definitely not my area, but dope! I'mma finish up and probably add a guest verse and try to shoot a video for it then.Originally posted by RoadToC4Fan View PostComment
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The first verse was good and it seemed like everything flowed smooth but the actually flow probably could of been tighter. The hook was awesome, probably my favorite part of the song. The second verse is where it got iffy to me. Something was just off and didn't seem to flow as smooth as the first verse... I haven't heard you in about 8 months to probably a year and you've showed great improvements and are off the poetic time of flow which is a good thingComment
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Right on, bro. Glad to see you're back, too. and yeah, idk, I'm really iffy about this whole song. I'm thinking about just rewriting the whole thing tomorrow, honestly.Originally posted by Young Corruption View PostComment
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The hook was fire, you just fell a bit off in the end of the second verse, maybe too much words in a bar or something,
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Right on! and yeah, I'mma just rewrite this entire thing. I'm glad I posted it here before youtube, lol. fuck it.Originally posted by Late122 View PostComment
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bump because updated verse is done and video coming soon.Comment
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