J-Smooth- Coldest Summer Ever (Feat. Poyo and Tragedy)

[JSmooth]

Track off of my upcoming TRUE FEELINGS 2 tape which drops AUGUST 13th…got my FNF member Trag on this one and also tha stuidios own Poyo. Let me know what yall think. feedback is much appreciated



Coldest Summer Ever- Coldest Summer Ever Final.mp3


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[Cli-City]

This got that I'm on one type of vibe....man Poyo is becoming very impressive...your track presence is becoming so potent....J Smooth inches away with my favorite verse.....Flow goes to Tragedy...but Man I'm addicted to Poyos his is the most enjoyable by far...Great track...

5/5

[broc717]

yall killed it man. The beat was too proper, with that being said you needed to come just as correct.... yall did. The hook was 5/5 the verses each had their own unique trait to them too. Good shit yall, keep grindin! check my tracks out if u get a chance smooth... we should link up.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

This got that I'm on one type of vibe....man Poyo is becoming very impressive...your track presence is becoming so potent....J Smooth inches away with my favorite verse.....Flow goes to Tragedy...but Man I'm addicted to Poyos his is the most enjoyable by far...Great track...

5/5

Preciate bro! S/o to smooth cause this shit was gonna bang with or without me so Im glad could add a lil something. and that nigga tragedy nice too

[JSmooth]

cli- glad i could inch out the best verse in your opinion on my own song lol. Poyo and trag came with it on this song

broc- thanks 4 the feed bro. yea i thought we all had unique verses which really helps the song. ill check out some of ur shit though

[TupacShaquer]

Sounds pro AF. Damn I fucking love your music man already got like 3 tracks downloaded from you. Waiting on that tape. The hook was good but ehh I didn't feel it. IDK.

Poyo went in but I felt like he was tryna imitate Wayne in this one. Just me, dope lines tho alway loved your shit and how your a prime example of new school music.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Sounds pro AF. Damn I fucking love your music man already got like 3 tracks downloaded from you. Waiting on that tape. The hook was good but ehh I didn't feel it. IDK.

Poyo went in but I felt like he was tryna imitate Wayne in this one. Just me, dope lines tho alway loved your shit and how your a prime example of new school music.

Lol I know the fuck the world line was something Wayne would say. But other than that I don't think anything else was similar to Wayne? But at least you liked it lls ��

[yungfamou5]

I don't think poyo sounded like wayne, in my opinion he went the hardest 5/5

Jsmooth had a nice flow I enjoyed his verse 4/5

Trad was cool, is he on here or just sumone u rap wit? Either his verse was also hard

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I don't think poyo sounded like wayne, in my opinion he went the hardest 5/5

Jsmooth had a nice flow I enjoyed his verse 4/5

Trad was cool, is he on here or just sumone u rap wit? Either his verse was also hard

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

jsmooth>>>>> tragedy>>>>> poyo.

jsmooth had the best lines, tragedy had the best flow.
every poyo verse is the exact same verse.
here's the next poyo verse, my prediction for his next song:

" i got a court date, then another court date, i smoke weed, i drink syrup, i got new shoes "
30 songs of that same verse

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J Smooth inches away with my favorite verse.....Flow goes to Tragedy...but Man I'm addicted to Poyos his is the most enjoyable by far...Great track...

5/5

looks like mr. cli city is a poyo fanboy said he was addicted to poyos

cli- glad i could inch out the best verse in your opinion on my own song lol. Poyo and trag came with it on this song

he was saying you to be his second favorite, as you see he wrote:
"poyos, his is the most enjoyable by far" he even said "by far" so that means by alot.

"jsmooth inches away..." better luck next time.

[morphineroberts]

Smooth (Drake) did his thing. He had alot of jewels in his 16!
"I never revisit her site once i log in!"
"They love my honesty i reel em in... fisher man!"

Poyo's verse was on point, but he channeled too much of Big Sean's cadence.

Tragedy took the gold!
"You niggas better be scared to death/ i aint at my peak/ I'm still learnin stuff"
Tragedy was the only cat who didnt sound like any other artist... he was the stand out to me.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Smooth (Drake) did his thing.

lmao, i swore that nigga was drake in another song he dropped a few months ago.
nigga got drake style down.
call him jrake smooth.
everybody went in on this though.
i dunno why, but i like the last verse the best though.

his voice sounds very similar to the first verse though.

[ATLien666]

J-Smooth:

Idk how I feel about your flow, but you do sound like Drake. It really hit me during that fisherman line. If that's you on the hook, dope shit. but yeah, your flow wasn't bad, it was just idk. Your delivery is great, though. That log(in) line is dope as fuck. Sounds like the instrumental started to overpower you at the end, lol, but that hook, though. I fucks with it. I would definitely listen to your mixtape

4/5

Poyo:

imo, you have the perfect flow/delivery in the studio. it's versatile as fuck and when it starts to lack, your delivery picks it up. Your verse was kinda eh, though. The Pac line was dope and your verse is the most enjoyable on the song. You need to bring some of the lyrical skill from those deep songs you do and bring it to these songs.

4/5

Tragedy -

Lyrically, the best verse, but the first two verses were more enjoyable. he has good delivery, but idk if it's his audio quality or his mic presence, but something bores me with him. it might be his flow, idk. the I ain't at my peak line was quotable, for sure. He brings something different to the song, it meshes well with the rest of ya'll verses.

4/5

Other:

I think you three should do more songs together. You guys have a weird chemistry, but it's enjoyable to listen to. I would love to see how you guys constantly try to outdo each other on a verse because all three verses bring something to the song and shit.

Overall - 4/5