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  • #13
    Originally posted by morphineroberts View Post
    Smooth (Drake) did his thing. He had alot of jewels in his 16!
    "I never revisit her site once i log in!"
    "They love my honesty i reel em in... fisher man!"

    Poyo's verse was on point, but he channeled too much of Big Sean's cadence.

    Tragedy took the gold!
    "You niggas better be scared to death/ i aint at my peak/ I'm still learnin stuff"
    Tragedy was the only cat who didnt sound like any other artist... he was the stand out to me.
    What sounded like big Sean? I don't really listen to him
    twitter.com/basedpoyo

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    • #14
      yungfamou5- preciate the feed and Tragedy is a part of our hometown group we have goin called FNF (First in Flight) but yea me and trag have an entire mixtape together called wright brothers and me an poyo have a few songs together and probably will do more

      atlien666- yea thats me on the hook bro im glad u liked that shit and thanks for the listen
      ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

      ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
      TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
      Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
      Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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      • #15
        Just made you a extra fan on twitter
        The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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        • #16
          You have a good song making ability, but it all feels like its inspired too much by Drake. Every aspect of the song is Drake-like... beat, hook, etc. But I do actually like the song tho, just pointing that out first. You and Tragedy both killed it, dope ass flows mixed in with some ill lyrics and a few witty punchlines... And I dig the hook as well. I still prefer you on that raw rappin' shit tho brotha. This song gets a 4/5 from me though.



          protect dunston at all costs

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          • #17
            Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
            You and Tragedy both killed it, dope ass flows mixed in with some ill lyrics and a few witty punchlines... And I dig the hook as well. I still prefer you on that raw rappin' shit tho brotha. This song gets a 4/5 from me though.
            you forgot to feedback poyo's verse.
            you always leave him out when giving feedback.

            YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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            • #18
              Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
              Just made you a extra fan on twitter
              preciate that bro i just saw the follow. good look
              ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

              ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
              TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
              Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
              Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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              • #19
                im usually the first dude to praise smooth but i didnt feel this track, didnt sound as professional as ur others
                Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
                But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
                So Just Call Me....
                "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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                • #20
                  The homie sound like a lyrical birdman

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                  • #21
                    yung mula fan- preciate the honesty and feed. give it a few more listen though it might grow on u


                    tunechi- lol not sure anything with birdman in it is a compliment...
                    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

                    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
                    TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
                    Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
                    Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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                    • #22
                      I like these more aggressive J Smooth flows, still hear the Drake comparisons though lol. I think the I'm On One comparisons come from the drop in the beat, for the hook. And the construction of the hook. The beginning of Poyo's verse sounds like the way Wayne's been rapping on some recent tracks, such as that Take it to the Head and that Keyshia Cole song. The switch up in the flow made it better though. Sounded a little monotonous though. Tragedy is always a breath of fresh air. I feel like he dumbed down the lyrics on this on though. Maybe cause he quit writing, like he stated in the verse. Good track though, different from all the other singles we've been getting.

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                      • #23
                        Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
                        I like these more aggressive J Smooth flows, still hear the Drake comparisons though lol. I think the I'm On One comparisons come from the drop in the beat, for the hook. And the construction of the hook. The beginning of Poyo's verse sounds like the way Wayne's been rapping on some recent tracks, such as that Take it to the Head and that Keyshia Cole song. The switch up in the flow made it better though. Sounded a little monotonous though. Tragedy is always a breath of fresh air. I feel like he dumbed down the lyrics on this on though. Maybe cause he quit writing, like he stated in the verse. Good track though, different from all the other singles we've been getting.
                        thanks for the feed bro. its always good to hear what people think…as far as the Drake comparison im not denyin it lol. Drizzy is one of my biggest inspirations. Im not stealin concepts or bitin lines but he has influenced me
                        ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

                        ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
                        TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
                        Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
                        Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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                        • #24
                          Originally posted by JSmooth View Post
                          thanks for the feed bro. its always good to hear what people think…as far as the Drake comparison im not denyin it lol. Drizzy is one of my biggest inspirations. Im not stealin concepts or bitin lines but he has influenced me
                          exactly howi feel with everyone people I say I sound like with the exception of big se lol
                          twitter.com/basedpoyo

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