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  • #25
    J's punches seem to be... reaching a little... dont sound too natural... Beat drowns him out in points too...

    That hook is.....
    Pretty weak. I understand the "epicness" of this track, but that hook didnt have me sold at all. Effects need some work. I'd say go back and re-write it, but meh what's done is done.

    Poyo: You stole 1/2 of Big Seans play book on this one.

    Trag: Came in and stole the show. Hands down. He had some cliches lines too, but still managed to be the most interesting.


    I dont see why this song got such high scores from people...

    Overall: 3.2/5

    Listened to the song a few more times...still iffy about it.

    Random question: J, you in college? or still in high school?

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    • #26
      Originally posted by mykill View Post
      J's punches seem to be... reaching a little... dont sound too natural... Beat drowns him out in points too...

      That hook is.....
      Pretty weak. I understand the "epicness" of this track, but that hook didnt have me sold at all. Effects need some work. I'd say go back and re-write it, but meh what's done is done.

      Poyo: You stole 1/2 of Big Seans play book on this one.

      Trag: Came in and stole the show. Hands down. He had some cliches lines too, but still managed to be the most interesting.


      I dont see why this song got such high scores from people...

      Overall: 3.2/5

      Listened to the song a few more times...still iffy about it.

      Random question: J, you in college? or still in high school?
      wow, you're so jealous dude.
      this song got such high scores because its amazing. jsmooth makes better songs than you man.
      that "fuck these niggas" song you made got low scores because it was pure rectum.
      stop hatin on jsmooth, he'll murder you.

      YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • #27
        Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
        wow, you're so jealous dude.
        this song got such high scores because its amazing. jsmooth makes better songs than you man.
        that "fuck these niggas" song you made got low scores because it was pure rectum.
        stop hatin on jsmooth, he'll murder you.

        nigga what!?





















        no seriously, I'm the worse rapper on this forum. JSmooth has tons more talent than I do.

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        • #28
          Originally posted by mykill View Post
          nigga what!?





















          no seriously, I'm the worse rapper on this forum. JSmooth has tons more talent than I do.
          gtfo, you're way better than jsmooth's bitch ass.

          YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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          • #29
            Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
            gtfo, you're way better than jsmooth's bitch ass.
            worse rapper in the stu: me
            shittiest lyrics: me
            whackest flow: me

            Jsmooth is dope, but sometimes I guess i dont feel it like some of these guys around here do

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            • #30
              Originally posted by mykill View Post
              worse rapper in the stu: me
              shittiest lyrics: me
              whackest flow: me

              Jsmooth is dope, but sometimes I guess i dont feel it like some of these guys around here do
              you are not the worst rapper motherfucker.
              you're forgetting about ole' fuckboy

              YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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              • #31
                Originally posted by mykill View Post
                J's punches seem to be... reaching a little... dont sound too natural... Beat drowns him out in points too...

                That hook is.....
                Pretty weak. I understand the "epicness" of this track, but that hook didnt have me sold at all. Effects need some work. I'd say go back and re-write it, but meh what's done is done.

                Poyo: You stole 1/2 of Big Seans play book on this one.

                Trag: Came in and stole the show. Hands down. He had some cliches lines too, but still managed to be the most interesting.


                I dont see why this song got such high scores from people...

                Overall: 3.2/5

                Listened to the song a few more times...still iffy about it.

                Random question: J, you in college? or still in high school?

                can someone please tell me how? like give me an example so maybe i can understand what y'all talking bout lol. and myk i feel like you don't be fucking none of my newer shit.


                and smooth maybe the best rapper here, but myk you up there don't sell yourself short



                and also, no more court references since I'm done with that shit lol
                twitter.com/basedpoyo

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                • #32
                  Originally posted by mykill View Post
                  J's punches seem to be... reaching a little... dont sound too natural... Beat drowns him out in points too...

                  That hook is.....
                  Pretty weak. I understand the "epicness" of this track, but that hook didnt have me sold at all. Effects need some work. I'd say go back and re-write it, but meh what's done is done.

                  Poyo: You stole 1/2 of Big Seans play book on this one.

                  Trag: Came in and stole the show. Hands down. He had some cliches lines too, but still managed to be the most interesting.


                  I dont see why this song got such high scores from people...

                  Overall: 3.2/5

                  Listened to the song a few more times...still iffy about it.

                  Random question: J, you in college? or still in high school?
                  neither im 22 so outta high school but didnt do the college thing
                  ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

                  ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
                  TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
                  Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
                  Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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                  • #33
                    Originally posted by JSmooth View Post
                    neither im 22 so outta high school but didnt do the college thing
                    wow, i always thought that you were younger.
                    i thought you were like 18.
                    Last edited by lilchukieforeheadbig; 07-31-2012, 01:56 AM.

                    YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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                    • #34
                      Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                      wow, i always thought that you were younger.
                      i thought you were like 18.
                      hah nah but 18 is about when i started rappin
                      ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

                      ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
                      TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
                      Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
                      Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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                      • #35
                        Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                        wow, i always thought that you were younger.
                        i thought you were like 18.
                        22 is still young. cant even rent a car till you're 25 lol

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                        • #36
                          Originally posted by mykill View Post
                          22 is still young. cant even rent a car till you're 25 lol
                          nowadays once you hit 20 you're considered old.
                          20 is the new 40.
                          i can only imagine how old people in their 30's and 40's feel.
                          how old are you mykill? im guessing 23 or 24

                          YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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