Sentus- The Nobler Gift

[Sentus]

Never done shit like this before but I felt like doing it because I like trying out new things, even if it's corny. If you like it, show it to your friends or share it on Facebook, twitter, whatever.

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...j-avenger.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post918899

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

rofl, sentus is back.
yeah its corny, but you did pretty good with it, considering the tracks that you usually do.
not something i'd share on facebook, twitter, etc, though lol.
this was cute though, something you'd show to ya girlfriend only.
but this kind of song sounds weird as fuck coming from you still.

[Sentus]

Yeah haha it was weird for me making the song but everyone was telling me I needed to do a more positive song and less depressing songs lol

[Sentus]

Damn I know I ain't been around in a while but buuump

[THA GR8 M8]

I salute you for trying to venture off into different kinds of music and trying new things, but I think you should stay away from this type of music lol. Not that it was bad. It just didn't sound well with your minor-aggressive sounding voice. I would much rather just hear you go over the normal style tracks you do. But besides that, the hook was pretty cool. The flow was on point the whole song, and the lyrics were on point. Nothing really wrong, I just wasn't vibing to it.

[KidComet]

Dude, that hook, lol no. sorry


Your flow isnt bad, its chill, you should try to switch it up more tho, every little thing you put in your verse to keep my attnetion the better.

[JSmooth]

Flow: 4/5 i was feelin the flow the whole time it sounded good with the beat
Lyrics: 4/5 for this type of track they were above average
Overal: 3.5/5 reason its lower is because i didnt like the hook and ur voice sounds like ur ready to kill this bitch ur rappin too lol. seriously though u should have tried to change up the way u sound for this type of song

[mykill]

That hook is no bueno....I see what you were trying to do, but the approach was iffy. Lyrics for it are ok though.

THIS IS DEFINITELY WEIRD to hear you rap about this subject matter lol.

Track is pretty good for what it is. Hook, however bad it sounds, kinda works and grows on ya. Your ability to take a put together a good concept shines in this one. Still can hear some hints of that battle rap flow. good job, and good to see ya stop back in to Tha Stu'.

Overall: 4/5

[Sentus]

Thanks everyone, and this song wasn't really for you guys, but the ladies love it if you know what I mean

[Young Corruption]

I don't know if its cause i'm drunk but i'm really feeling this song lol. The hook like everyone said was weird to hear from you but if you never heard your music before its actually not all that bad. The lyrics were awesome. I try to do songs like this but can't come up with the words and i think you did a pretty damn good job. Make me miss my girl to be honest lol damn now i know its the beer talking, but in all seriousness this was a pretty damn dope song and its about time you came back to the studio

[cGrumm]

This sounds like an old school song lol. The mixing sounds really good. The vocals sound like they should be like that. The lyrics were average, nothing stood out. The chorus was the thing that caught my eye on this one. There were slip ups on the flow here and there, or that would have put it over the top. But its good, kicking it old school!
4/5

[Sentus]

Thanks guys, I'll have to keep in mind that this sounds good while you're drunk.